Hi there, I have tried to do something creative and a little different with my new squeeze page and would love your thoughts on what I came up with. I wasn't exactly planning on making the page the way it is, but I just got an idea and thought I'd see how it panned out You can find it here www.ernielonardo.com Thanks
I would go for a headline that helps people know right off what you are about. I had to read down a ways before I figured out what I would be getting if I joined your list. Sounds like a great list/concept, just took me too long to figure it out. The header also seemed really big, took up a huge chunk of the area above the fold.
In FF your header is not the same width as the content. Also have to agree about the header. You have not mentioned what your website is about, or even stated the websites name or domain - not great if you wish to brand your website like all the other richguy websites. Which it seems is the concept you are playing on.. Also header is probably a bit too big, and doesn't really convey any message. Not even conveys the 'crazy' that you are trying to. I would consider changing it to something else.
Thanks guys you've given me something to think about, I'm going to change it to make it more easier to figure out what it's about.