English Grammar. Help! Urgent!

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  1. #1
    Hello!

    I am from Spain/Portugal and I need to know if this text is 100% correct in english:

    "I would like to invite you to my website:................ It is a free informational website with articles and resources to help..........create their own ..........

    "I would be very pleased if you take a look at my website and I would be very glad if you tell to your friends, co-workers and relatives about this resource. Remember, it is absolutely free."


    thanks!
     
    chewie49, Oct 31, 2007 IP
  2. chewie49

    chewie49 Well-Known Member

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    #2
    Thank you very much.

    It is enough if English is your mother tongue ;) ....is it?

    Cheers!
     
    chewie49, Oct 31, 2007 IP
  3. chewie49

    chewie49 Well-Known Member

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    #3
    So, ....Can I print? Is it o.k?
     
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  4. pubdomainshost.com

    pubdomainshost.com Peon

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    #4
    es correcto :)

    Adios,
    GS
     
    pubdomainshost.com, Oct 31, 2007 IP
  5. Meth_

    Meth_ Well-Known Member

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    #5
    apart from all the fullstops in the first one, it looks AOK!
     
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  6. Divisive Cottonwood

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    #6
    yep, reads okay
     
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  7. CountryBoy

    CountryBoy Prominent Member

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    #7
    100% Englishman here - it is word perfect.
     
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  8. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    #8
    Is it just me, or does it sound better like that?
     
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  9. chewie49

    chewie49 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!
     
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    CountryBoy Prominent Member

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    #10
    It makes no odds - each is correct, but grammaraticians (my word) would probably try and avoid the use of 'would' twice in the same sentence.
     
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    davewashere Active Member

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    Agreed. Also, take out the "to" in the "tell to your friends" part. The "to" is not correct when you use the ending "about this resource".
     
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    #12

    It sounds better if you take out the second "I"
     
    Simismy, Oct 31, 2007 IP