English gramma help request

Discussion in 'Google' started by alfonko, Dec 18, 2007.

  1. #1
    ok, i have written this article but my first language is spanish, im learning english on the fly though... so is damn full of mistakes and i need some fellows to correct me since im really lost with my span-english (im starting to believe that im going to get worse in both languages, my brain is about to collapse with uses of english and spanish xD) Anyway, thanks in advance for any kind of corrections, i'm totally thankfull since now for this.

    ok here the article:

    Nowadays almost everyone has a landline phone and at least a cell phone. Communications came to make our life easier and faster. Since Telegraph men have been trying to figure out a way to improve the existing technology. And development has never stopped process since then. The more needs regarding communication, the more technologies that came up. Therefore, people discover the usability of communication in normal life and in business. So as the need for new technologies increases, new inventions were made to satisfy the consumer market. A certain day internet came and a big revolution begun to rise, VoIP also known as Voice over IP that means in friendly words "Voice over the internet". Ever since Voip was first introduced to the market, it has become a growing thing to help people and
    business to communicate.

    For instance, you are sent to Ireland in a business travel and you need to make a phone call home to Texas. Well instead of paying high fees of long distance calls, you can simply call over your Internet at a local rate. This is also referred to as a Voip business solution. But what about if you don't have a pc with internet in the place where you currently are? Nowadays there are websites that sells amazing Voip solutions involving land line phones and virtual phone numbers. How does this work? please read the next
    paragraph to fully understand how it works.

    Through sites that sells voip solutions for common people you can forward your calls to any number of your choice, therefore if anyone is calling you are picking up the call. For example, you are running out of time to go to your son's baseball match but you NEED to close a deal and you are waiting your partner's call. He flew to Australia to finish the last details of that contract and you need to be aware of everything. Just get a virtual phone number from Australia and get each call forwarded to your cell phone (in easy steps through your web-panel inside the member's area of the website where you bought your Australian virtual phone number) you are done! you can go to your sons baseball match and expect to be called by your partner at any moment... while looking at the baseball match! Being local! Enjoy the freedom of being able to speak freely with out worries, with out big costs!

    Of course this is VoIP made easy! So the only thing you need to enjoy voip benefits is an active account at any of the websites selling voip solutions for common people , no need to have complex hardware or software. Just chose a plan, chose a country, a virtual number and forward all calls to an end land phone line of your choice; could be your mobile phone, your office phone, home phone or any combination you'd like to make.
     
    alfonko, Dec 18, 2007 IP
  2. magda

    magda Notable Member

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    There's a glaring mistake every 3 or 4 words - it's too much to ask for an entire rewrite as a favour - go to the copywriting subforum and pay a few euros to get a good job done well.
     
    magda, Dec 18, 2007 IP
  3. alfonko

    alfonko Active Member

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    Does a forum like that exists? :O
     
    alfonko, Dec 18, 2007 IP
  4. Ohene

    Ohene Guest

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    is there a reason why you are targeting english and not your home country?
     
    Ohene, Dec 18, 2007 IP