Contest Ebook Cover + Site Header... Chance for 2 winners + BONUS!... Contest ends quickly!

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  1. malditah

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    #21
    Thanks for the feedback :)

    Here's my revision

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  2. good designer

    good designer Well-Known Member

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    #22
    is this contest is still open... ????
     
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  3. good designer

    good designer Well-Known Member

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    #23
    here is my attempt

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  4. Blogfiliate

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    #24
    I love your revision. It's clean and has a nice feel to it. The "cash" was a very nice touch. The muted colors work much better with the cow graphic.

    Do you have a header in mind for this design?

    Thank you!
    David
     
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  5. malditah

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    #25
    i'll do header now...thanks for the feedback.
     
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  6. Blogfiliate

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    #26
    good designer,

    Thank you for your entry... those are some sick looking cows. Utterly! =)

    In general, I think your design is too crowded. I like the cows and the background you placed behind them. That works for me, although I think the dollar signs the cows are holding should be money green, not Kermit green.

    I think the crowding is in the arrangement of text. Less is more. I think a single quote below the title would do the trick, and I'd scratch the domain name at the bottom.

    Also, please slim the thickness of the book style. A manifesto is more of a report than a book.

    Thanks! I look forward to seeing your update.

    David
     
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  7. malditah

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    #27
    feedback is appreciated...thanks :)

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  8. Blogfiliate

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    #28
    malditah,

    I think the font treatment needs something. It's all too "loud" and in your face. Maybe soften the "A Secret..." quote a little?

    David
     
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  9. malditah

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    #29
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    revised.

    another

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  10. good designer

    good designer Well-Known Member

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    #30
    thanx for feedback here is two different revized version of ebook .. after finalized will switch to banner work
    option a
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    option b
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  11. good designer

    good designer Well-Known Member

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    #31
    simple clean background version :
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  12. Blogfiliate

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    #32
    This one is spot on. The updated treatment is very nice and the font change was exactly what was needed. Nice work!

    ~ David
     
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  13. Blogfiliate

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    #33
    So far, I like this one the most from you. The clean background is nice... not so over the top with money. I also like the "happy cow". I'd be interested in seeing your idea for a site header.

    Thank you!

    David
     
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  14. malditah

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    #34
    will add more details on the banner :)

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    hope you like this better :)
     
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  15. willhaynes

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    #35
    I wasn't really feeling my last entry, here's a new concept.

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    #36
    That really dressed up the header. I like the accents you made. Very nice work.
     
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    #37
    To all Designers,

    THANK YOU for your entries. This is now a two person finale between malditah and thelegendary.

    malditah and thelegendary,

    You both have the opportunity to "blow me away" with a final design and collect the extra $50 BONUS. Give me your best shot.

    malditah... possibly a little more color in "TRIAD MANIFESTO" (and fix the spelling, please!).

    thelegendary... malditah, is crushing you with her header design.

    I can't wait to see what you both come back with.

    Good Luck!

    David
     
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  18. malditah

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    #38
    Thanks for the feedback. Here's my revision.

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    I'll work on the ebook.
     
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  19. good designer

    good designer Well-Known Member

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    #39
    with different color variation
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  20. jtoms

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    #40
    my try

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