Contest Ebook Cover + Site Header... Chance for 2 winners + BONUS!... Contest ends quickly!

Thanks for the feedback

Here's my revision

 

is this contest is still open... ????

 

here is my attempt

 

I love your revision. It's clean and has a nice feel to it. The "cash" was a very nice touch. The muted colors work much better with the cow graphic.

Do you have a header in mind for this design?

Thank you!
David

 

i'll do header now...thanks for the feedback.

 

good designer,

Thank you for your entry... those are some sick looking cows. Utterly! =)

In general, I think your design is too crowded. I like the cows and the background you placed behind them. That works for me, although I think the dollar signs the cows are holding should be money green, not Kermit green.

I think the crowding is in the arrangement of text. Less is more. I think a single quote below the title would do the trick, and I'd scratch the domain name at the bottom.

Also, please slim the thickness of the book style. A manifesto is more of a report than a book.

Thanks! I look forward to seeing your update.

David

 

feedback is appreciated...thanks

 

malditah,

I think the font treatment needs something. It's all too "loud" and in your face. Maybe soften the "A Secret..." quote a little?

David

 

revised.

another

 

thanx for feedback here is two different revized version of ebook .. after finalized will switch to banner work
option a


option b

 

simple clean background version :

 

This one is spot on. The updated treatment is very nice and the font change was exactly what was needed. Nice work!

~ David

 

So far, I like this one the most from you. The clean background is nice... not so over the top with money. I also like the "happy cow". I'd be interested in seeing your idea for a site header.

Thank you!

David

 

will add more details on the banner



hope you like this better

 

I wasn't really feeling my last entry, here's a new concept.

 

That really dressed up the header. I like the accents you made. Very nice work.

 

To all Designers,

THANK YOU for your entries. This is now a two person finale between malditah and thelegendary.

malditah and thelegendary,

You both have the opportunity to "blow me away" with a final design and collect the extra $50 BONUS. Give me your best shot.

malditah... possibly a little more color in "TRIAD MANIFESTO" (and fix the spelling, please!).

thelegendary... malditah, is crushing you with her header design.

I can't wait to see what you both come back with.

Good Luck!

David

 

Thanks for the feedback. Here's my revision.





I'll work on the ebook.

 

with different color variation

 

my try