Easy $25 Logo Contest (48 Hours)

FEEDBACK

@technoguy: Thanks for joining the contest, it is always nice to have your artwork in these contests. I like your fonts and color layout on the title (good job in following the instructions on differiating the words). Out of your two designs I think your second design (http://www.itcodes-offshore.com/tinybaby1.jpg) has the better babies. Also, I would tone down the images in the background a bit. They take the eye away from the title and slogan.

@MohammadHaja: Thanks for your entry. I think both color schemes for the title looks good. However, I wouldn't have the cirlce of flowers overlaping any part of the baby's face.

@mmorete879: Wow, that baby has blue eyes =). I wouldn't have the leaves overlapping the baby's face, it is a bit distracting. Also, I would wash out the color in the leaves so that they are not so dominant, and strengthen the colors in the title. I would also move the tagline to be by the title. Hope this helps.

@Patricksia2007: It has been a long time since I have had you in one of my contest, welcome back and thanks for participating! I like the children in this design, however, I think the pink is too strong, and the snowflakes also don't work. I would also change out the script font. Finally, the client wants "Tiny" and "Talk" to be one color, and "Baby" to be another color. Let me know if you have any questions.

@cottonStella: It is always a pleasure to have your talent in my design contests, it has been a while! Nice job on changing the color on the little boy's shirt. Both these designs look good, however, the background is really busy. I would either have stripes or stars but not both.

@pakidesigner: I assume your second thread is a duplicate entry, right? I think you did a smashing job on finding some great baby images! I particularly like the messy baby. Some recommendations would be to blend these images better with their background. Also, you misspelled "communicate" in the tagline. Finally, on your first two submissions the client wants "Tiny" and "Talk" to be one color, and "Baby" to be another color.

@Chewysmom: Thanks for joining another one of my contests (I promise that this contest won't be as long as our last one). Concerning your design, I am not sure about the shine on the baby's finger. The client also wants "Tiny" and "Talk" to be one color, and "Baby" to be another color. I would also like to see what the logo looks like without the background color. I think the peach doesn't fit the rest of the other color scheme.

@Sarahmclaughlanx: Thanks for your submissions. These look good, my suggestion though, is to use one image instead of two. The two images compete for the viewer's focus. Both images would work, so I will leave up to you which image to keep.

@hemp: Neither of these designs are what we are looking for. Thanks for your efforts.

@willhaynes: It looks like I am going to keep you busy designing this weekend =). Both of these designs look good, but I think the image without the phone is better (the phone makes the image look out dated). Also, I wouldn't split the tagline in the submission with the phone baby. Finally, the client wants "Tiny" and "Talk" to be one color, and "Baby" to be another color. Hope that helps.

 

Thanks! i will choose one image only.
Ill be back with my revisions soon,

 

Updated:



-Will

 

thanks for feedback

 

Hello
Thank you for feedback and appreciating
Here are changes as i understood , by toning down you ment to make the babies fit well in background rather than distracting?



Anything Let me know
Feedback appreciated

 

Thanks for the feedback

I gave the baby a blue eye and made it stand out instead of it overlapping

 

UPDATE

I will be speaking with the client shortly, and will show all these new submissions. Thanks for everyone's effort.

 

Thanks Paul it's always a pleasure to be part of your contests ^_^
here is revision,

 

UPDATE

After speaking with the client there are four designs (three artists) that she really liked. The other designs she felt were nice but not what she wanted. Ultimately, what I took from our conversation was that the client is really focused on the image of the child or children. If she doesn't care for the image of your baby than the design is dead in the water. Oh, also, the client doesn't care for the baby block letters in some of your designs.

Therefore, so not to waste everyone's time giving feedback on designs the client won't use I will announce the three designers and offer feedback on their submissions. Please feel free to submit a new design if you didn't make the cut. Hopefully, all this feedback helps. Let me know if you have any questions, and as always thank you for your hard work!

FEEDBACK

@cottonStella: The client liked both of your submissions a lot. She agreed with me that the your first submissions backgrounds were too busy. With your second submission she preferred the stars over the dots. She is going to get back to me on whether she likes the taglin up at the top or under the logo.

@MohammadHaja: The client preferred your first submission with the blue and pink letter, but she prefers the flowers behind the baby, like what you have in your second submission.

@Patricksia2007: The client absolutely loves your children, but she didn't care for anything else. She agreed with all the previous feedback I shared with you. Basically, too much pink, the font is too frilly, and the snowflakes don't work. Truly, it was your children image that kept the client from cutting your logo.

 

Thanks for the feedback =D

oh and forgot to post this one

 

Heres more variations of the baby pic

 

another try

 

Hi, here is my try,

http://i736.photobucket.com/albums/xx5/vashadesign/tbheaderlogov1.jpg

http://i736.photobucket.com/albums/xx5/vashadesign/tbheaderlogov2.jpg

http://i736.photobucket.com/albums/xx5/vashadesign/tbheaderlogov3.jpg

Waiting for feedback.

Thanks!

 

Hope your client likes it.

 

Mine.

http://i35.tinypic.com/fokdjl.png

 

UPDATE

The client is unavailable today, so I will have feedback for you tomorrow (it's 5:30am Sunday, right now). I hope to close the contest in 24 hours. Please get your submissions in. Thanks. ~Paul

 

Thanks for your feedback.
I will update accordingly.

Cheers!
Patrick

 

Thanks, see my refinement at http://patricksia.com/2009/10/contest-design-tinybabytalk-com/
Some slight variation....

Cheers!
Patrick

 

Here's a new slightly revised version of my entry.

http://i36.tinypic.com/25ul93r.png

Thanks.