DP Please Review my Site

Thanks Mike,

I'll see what I can do about that, I will try and get a few images to give a little more to view on my opening page. Main reason there are not more at this time, is I was trying to get my loading speed better for people who are not on Cable or broadband.

As for the Font, I could probably go down one more notch on it, I just don't want to make it to small. I know my father likes to come to the site and his eyes are not that good. Thanks for your input tho, I will see if I can go down anymore on the font... but it will be up to my father if it's a go or not.

 

You have Categories spelled as Categorys at the top of the page. Also, the graphics at the top of the page is too jagged. You need to use smoothed fonts and cutouts. If you are expecting people to submit their addresses, you have to provide a secure form.

J.D.

 

Thanks J.D.

I'm looking into making the forms secure on my server, the ways they are explaining it to me is really confusing tho may take a little while for me to implement.

Also the fonts and Graphics have been smoothed.

 

I think overall the site looks pretty good, but I'm in my 20's and the site is hard for me to read. The dark background with the bright text almost makes it hard to go from one section of text to another... Great idea for a site! Good luck!

 

I understand where your coming from Joshril, it's just the opposite for me dark on light hurts my eyes, so I had to make the site something I could look at, because I will most likely be looking at it more than anyone else. But if it helps I can try and tone the color of the text a bit more.

 

I just wanted to Thank Everyone, who took the time out to review my website. It really helped me to see, what the problems where with it, and helped me a great deal on fixing it. The site is much simpler now, and I feel it is much more user friendly, hopefully, once I finish with all the minor details I think it will Look really Nice.

Thanks All,

 

The site looking nice but I found your content is less. Try to add keyword rich articles on your niche in order to be found in search engines.

 

Try to improve, all people will directly see the ads.
The colors also match.
If you want you can also review my site !

 

its a parking page now

 

What happened to your website?

Is it just a parking page? :-?

 

Good site and i like the color, that is soft and also simple.

 

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