I was curious, i just threw up my site a few months ago, and ive gotten pretty good buisness so far and all the customers are happy. I'm just curious how professional it looks compaired to other sites, and where it could use improvement. www.almarsguides.com
I didn't look at your site, but the words "threw up my site" and professional really don't match to me.
Hey I looked at your site and the images look well. However if we are talking about a "professional" looking site I am afraid it falls short. The way the content is structured doesn´t make it look very professional. It looks more like something you typed on Word and copy/pasted on the site. Restructrure that. Also see if you can find a nice background matching WoW themes or designs. And also try to post some customer feedback that if possible includes an image (like the one you have of Ambassador Almar) to add to your testimonial base. This will certainly increase your conversion rate and add to your reputation.
This is a message board not a consulting firm. This is also spam as if you "threw your website" up a few months ago why do you only have one post at the time of this post?
It depends what you are going for. If you want to look like "one of them" this is good. It looks like it was done by someone who doesn't know much about making money online and wants to share his knowledge at a price, nothing more. However, if you want to look professional, you may want to change some things around. A centered, large and colored headline is where I'd start...