Domination Of A Niche

Hey tell me what you guys think>> http://makemoneydontpay.blogspot.com/2009/05/domination-of-niche.html

 

Improve spelling mistakes/grammar.

 

Improve spelling mistakes/grammar as bidzapbiz suggested + Use live links.

 

Apart from using a good standard of grammar and spelling, I'd suggest splitting the bigger paragraphs to at least half their current size so it just flows for the reader and doesn't become a chore to read.

 

I would change the color of the title to something like #800000

 

Nice content! But I would make your paragraphs a bit smaller I was getting lost.

 

Hi

I would split the different subjects / sub - catorgories with a bold title, so viewers can refer to sections depending on what content they are seeking.

 

just improve on the grammar and you will be ok!