Does this Article Promote my Keyword ?

Discussion in 'Keywords' started by seoocean, Jan 4, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hello everyone,

    Please look at this article and put your views if it does justice to my Keyword - "innovage".

    What changes should i make in this ?
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    In our day and age, everyone loves to stay connected to each other. With advances in technology, it is always becoming easier for people to stay in touch with their friends and loved ones, from any location in the world. While there are options to communicate with people through email on the Internet, the majority of people still prefer to hear the voices of the people that they are talking to, and rely on phone calls to make this happen. Options for making phone calls are plentiful these days, with everything from tiny cell phones to Innovage LCD touch panel phone for the home or office.

    Phones today come with a number of different features, such as ring tones and Caller ID, which allows you to personalize the way that you stay in touch with people in your life. Innovage phones come with even more special features, such as a built in calculator, and the ability to auto-dial the numbers that you place on your calling list. Speakerphone is another feature that has been added to both a number of stationary and cordless phones, and is a great feature for people in the business sector who regularly make conference calls.

    If you’re debating what type of Innovage phone to get, there are numerous options, and it is good to do research about what features are offered, and then decide which are the most important to you. Shopping for phones online is the easiest way to pick out a phone, since it gives you the most options, and a chance to look around for the lowest price or highest quality. Best of all, you won’t even have to leave your house!

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    Or this looks fine in terms of SEO.
     
    seoocean, Jan 4, 2006 IP
  2. sebastianrs

    sebastianrs Active Member

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    #2
    article is fine. what is it used for? for a blog or for article submission sites? or any other promotional use?
     
    sebastianrs, Jan 6, 2006 IP
  3. latehorn

    latehorn Guest

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    #3
    what's your site?
     
    latehorn, Jan 10, 2006 IP
  4. T0PS3O

    T0PS3O Feel Good PLC

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    #4
    If you hadn't posted that on your site yet, DP now has the original article and yours will probably become duplicate content. Also expect DP to outrank you for the same article.

    In sentences like this one:
    you can put the KW again without it looking ugly:

    Before the 3d paragraph I'd also add:

    <h4>Which Innovage Phone?</h4>
     
    T0PS3O, Jan 10, 2006 IP
  5. seoocean

    seoocean Well-Known Member

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    Thanks Tops 30, But i havent used this article on my site.
    This is going to be used for promotional purpose.


    Thanks Sebastianrs and Latehorn too.

    Seo Ocean
     
    seoocean, Jan 10, 2006 IP
  6. internetcheers

    internetcheers Guest

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    article looks good :)
     
    internetcheers, Jan 11, 2006 IP
  7. seoocean

    seoocean Well-Known Member

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    Thanks internetcheers !!

    Seo Ocean
     
    seoocean, Jan 30, 2006 IP
  8. seoocean

    seoocean Well-Known Member

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    Still looking for some expert feedback -

    Would it be a good idea to submit the same article to sites ?

    Seo Ocean
     
    seoocean, Mar 28, 2006 IP