Does my squeeze page be looking good?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by alvinchua91, Dec 4, 2012.

  1. #1
    How does it look? :)

    What not to eat to lose weight

    Thanks for each and every review and constructive comment you post :D

    Also, is this considered a bridge page? Cause apparently google adwords banned my advert for this page, and have not refunded my monies already deposited with adwords -.-
     
    alvinchua91, Dec 4, 2012 IP
  2. TheCreator

    TheCreator Banned

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    #2
    I think you should enrich more contents on your landing page.
     
    TheCreator, Dec 4, 2012 IP
  3. natattack06

    natattack06 Greenhorn

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    Not bad, copy is a bit stale though.

    I'd suggest instead of your current title, something more engaging like: "1 Weird Tip To Lose 3 Dress Sizes In The Next 14 days" Or "Learn How An Average Gal Lost 2 Dress Sizes In 2 Weeks!"
    [h=1][/h]
     
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  4. meltinzone

    meltinzone Member

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    Yep! That's the kind of page that offers nothing to anyone but the person building/collecting/profiting from the email subscriptions.
    Also the fact that you're "offered (cough* forced)" to stay on the page when trying to close it, well that wouldn't help things like google. Plus if you're on the receiving end it is totally annoying/frustrating.
    I'd remove it.
    OR
    Make as much money with the site as you can BUT DO NOT use it for any whitehat ways of monetising a site (adwords/affiliates/etc).
    If down the road you turn it into a proper site, I'd still be wary about using adwords on it if google have already been made aware of the url.

    Hope it helps mate. Good luck :)
     
    meltinzone, Dec 4, 2012 IP
  5. Nawshale

    Nawshale Active Member

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    Hi, the page seems okay and simple.

    It contains too little content which cannot really attract visitors. I think one way to entice your visitors click your link is to make your site look more interesting. Add more content to your site and improve how you present the content.



    Hope this helps.
    :)
     
    Nawshale, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  6. alvinchua91

    alvinchua91 Well-Known Member

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    haha unfortunately it is already banned :/ im also banned from adwords, so im doing other methods to monetize it! I also have another main weight loss/fitness blog which I intend to grow into an authority site
     
    alvinchua91, Dec 6, 2012 IP
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    jimmyt200388 Well-Known Member

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    looks clean and nice! only thing i hate is that alert when you try leave. It looks like a scam when I see those
     
    jimmyt200388, Dec 6, 2012 IP
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    smith07 Greenhorn

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    the alert boxes are sometimes annoying. otherwise the site is good ;)
     
    smith07, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  9. alvinchua91

    alvinchua91 Well-Known Member

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    alright thanks... for your opinion :)
     
    alvinchua91, Dec 8, 2012 IP
  10. LHANCHA

    LHANCHA Peon

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    Tank you
    Squeezepagess.blogspot.com
     
    LHANCHA, Dec 10, 2012 IP
  11. HardTaffy

    HardTaffy Greenhorn

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    your layout leaves quite a bit of "whitespace" for anyone who visits on a Landscape Monitor
    that same design been overused a trillion times and all the sites who recycle that format uses the same "show me the video" button
    id say customize EVERYTHING, from the buzz words to adding actual content. relevant imagery in the background & more appealing graphics
     
    HardTaffy, Dec 13, 2012 IP
  12. pandegkyen

    pandegkyen Member

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    you need many struggling to develop
     
    pandegkyen, Dec 24, 2012 IP
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    gregb1981 Peon

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    #13
    nice squeeze page, looks good
     
    gregb1981, Dec 26, 2012 IP
  14. rollwithsoul15

    rollwithsoul15 Greenhorn

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    Does anyone think the wording "what not to eat to lose weight" sounds weird?
     
    rollwithsoul15, Dec 26, 2012 IP