Do you find my article funny?

http://www.captainfunny.com/gorillas-are-smart/

I'm trying to be somewhat funny in my articles. I'm going for a 'funny blog'. What do you guys think?

 

You need to advice people profanity is in the article. That way you don't offend anyone.

 

you're not fnny at all. First of all you should get rid of the dirty talk and read this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Humor

 

Hm, not really. You move from topic to topic too quickly. Read some Maddox stuff and then try and improve

 

Your gorilla wish made me smile (not laugh)