Directory Kit's First Directory Review Ever on PagePower

Discussion in 'Directories' started by slashpix, Sep 18, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hey,

    Dear Directory Owners

    This is the first time ever, I have tried writing a review about a directory in the Directory Kit. And I would like to know what you think about it guys.

    I tried to keep it simple yet informative. I summarized the main points of the directory. I covered a number of key factors in any directory, such as design, concept, usability and other unique features if any.

    The review I am talking about can be found here.

    Any sort of feedback is appreciated.
     
    slashpix, Sep 18, 2007 IP
  2. swedal

    swedal Notable Member

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    Honestly, for me it sounds like your selling or promoting the directory rather then reviewing it. Too many sales words for an impartial review.

    Just my opinion though.
     
    swedal, Sep 18, 2007 IP
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  3. vinny

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    #3
    good review! thought it was very helpful
     
    vinny, Sep 18, 2007 IP
  4. wildweb

    wildweb Peon

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    #4
    slash, I always enjoy reading your articles but I would have to agree with swedal's comments on this particular "review". Also, you have a few typos going on in the review..Might want to check on those.

    Good effort on the "review" and keep up your work. Site is looking better every time I visit.

    tom
     
    wildweb, Sep 18, 2007 IP
  5. mikey1090

    mikey1090 Moderator Staff

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    #5
    Site looks nice but that was not a review. Try structure your reviews with sub-headings. Have certain topics, like design, structure, strength(backlinks traffic etc), then talk about the bad points and how it could be improved. Then sum it all up in a conclusion.
     
    mikey1090, Sep 19, 2007 IP
  6. loredan

    loredan Well-Known Member

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    Well... from my point of view the review was just... niceee :)

    Thank you Slashpix, my only PagePower fan :))
     
    loredan, Sep 19, 2007 IP