design review please

Discussion in 'Websites' started by diveloper, Mar 17, 2011.

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  1. #1
    Hi

    I have been playing around with a few e-commerce design ideas. please let me know your thoughts on the domain and design
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    diveloper, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  2. JPMiddleton

    JPMiddleton Well-Known Member

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    #2
    "bodyfaster' and 'achieve your goals the right way' seem contrasting comments in my opinion. doing it the right way, doesn't involve it being fast - does it? (I honestly have no idea, was just my first thoughts)

    I like your design though, really easy to navigate and slick. Nice job.
     
    JPMiddleton, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  3. diveloper

    diveloper Active Member

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    #3
    i agree, ignore the strap line, I have changed it for now until I decide on what it can be
     
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    diveloper, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  4. ustas

    ustas Member

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    #4
    my version :)
    Untitled-2.jpg
     
    ustas, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  5. diveloper

    diveloper Active Member

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    haha thanks for that "adjusted" version. so folks more opinions on both versions and the design in general please
     
    diveloper, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  6. Justanotheradmin

    Justanotheradmin Peon

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    #6
    Looks pretty good. The dark background is pretty dark, maybe some stripes or something to lighten it up slightly. Maybe not a true black but an off black like 222222 or 333333
     
    Justanotheradmin, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  7. diveloper

    diveloper Active Member

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    ok i have made the background lighter. I think it looks better. thanks
     
    diveloper, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  8. JPMiddleton

    JPMiddleton Well-Known Member

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    Well then i'm pretty positive about your site, nice job.
     
    JPMiddleton, Mar 17, 2011 IP
  9. yutou

    yutou Peon

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    #9
    You might want to have different colors for the price in those boxes :)

    maybe make it bold + italic + red color? Just a suggestion ;)

    Cheers,

    Yutou
     
    yutou, Mar 17, 2011 IP
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    #10
    Just one suggestion:
    It will be good if you can add in some monetization banners on the right hand side (below your opt-in box).

    That will be prefect!

    Hope this helps.

    Regards,
    Richman25
     
    Richman25, Mar 18, 2011 IP
  11. nenkai

    nenkai Greenhorn

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    #11
    hey simple esign.. i like that....
     
    nenkai, Mar 18, 2011 IP
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    #12
    am agree with richman25, you could put some advertising there... and, whats your minimum resolution? bcoz it looks to wide for me, cmiiw
     
    goflash, Mar 19, 2011 IP
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    Swordman666 Peon

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    #13
    Very cool, i like it
     
    Swordman666, Mar 20, 2011 IP