Critique please?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by newman32, Sep 30, 2008.

  1. #1
    OK - this is my first blog project where I'm trying to apply some if the stuff I've learned here @ DP. Its a Beer Review site, and like I mentioned its primarily for learning and fun! If I could make money somehow, that would be great, but its not the top goal right now.

    I have some original content, and was happy to see it reach PR3 recently, which I know doesn't mean a heck of a lot, but still I was happy!

    That being said, I would love to hear your constructive opinions about it - what am I doing good, what can I do better?

    http://thebrewclub.com

    So, blast away, and and all thoughts appreciated - and thanks so much in advance for your time! :)
     
    newman32, Sep 30, 2008 IP
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  2. kittyluver

    kittyluver Notable Member

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    Nice niche with wonderful design. Keep it up!!!
     
    kittyluver, Sep 30, 2008 IP
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    shadowboxing Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Nice layout and lots of pictures. If you are not planning on monetizing your blog much, its fine as it is. What plugins are you using and how do you plan on generating traffic?
     
    shadowboxing, Sep 30, 2008 IP
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    webbom Well-Known Member

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    Nice site. I like that you have it well sorted in categories. It makes it easier to search for beers you may like but don't know.
     
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  5. newman32

    newman32 Peon

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    Thanks for the feedback Webbom and kittyluver!

    shadowboxing - I certainly wouldn't mind monetizing someday, but it seems particularly hard to do with this niche for some reason. Of the things I have tried, nothing really clicked. Any thoughts on that?

    As far as traffic, I'm trying to post in related blogs, I got in DMOZ, some of the bloger sites - its hard. Some of these beers are so small nobody would even search for them! Still working on that too!

    Plugins, well I'm using a few. All in one SEO, Contact Form 7, Most Popular, Page Link Manager, Recent Comments and Recent Posts. Might be a few more, but those are the main ones.
     
    newman32, Sep 30, 2008 IP
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    realmoneyreviews Peon

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    Hello newman32, I love the design. It looks very clean and fresh. My only suggestion would be to brighten the link colors on the right hand side a little bit. It seems a little dark to me. Maybe a brighter orange would work.

    Overall, however, I think it looks very professional. I'm about to turn 21 so I may just have to bookmark your site for some future advice!
     
    realmoneyreviews, Sep 30, 2008 IP
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    desipooja Guest

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    The site looks cool but few pages. If you want your site to be listed in the google search , you need to follow the things mentioned.

    Host the images used in your site with your domain name... Do not copy the url.. It will indirectly drive traffic to some other site...

    Post more ads with proper keywords such as worlds best beers and bars etc.........
     
    desipooja, Oct 1, 2008 IP
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    newman32 Peon

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    Thanks for the tips! I'm happy that people are finding it mostly favorable :)
     
    newman32, Oct 1, 2008 IP
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    kingofsanda Peon

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    The blog looks good, it's well designed.
     
    kingofsanda, Oct 1, 2008 IP
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    Ecreation Active Member

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    Your blog looks good.
     
    Ecreation, Oct 1, 2008 IP
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    I like the site and the topic. You can always monetize with some DUI Lead offers!;)
     
    smithj, Oct 2, 2008 IP
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    Your site isn't loading... Is anyone else having this problem?
     
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    Iboltmedia - yeah, I've seen that from time to time. Its on a cheap shared host right now. (Lesson learned!)

    Smithj - DUI lead offers? That's good thinking!

    Thanks all!
     
    newman32, Oct 3, 2008 IP
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    Matt B Active Member

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    I can see what you're trying to do with the header but it doesn't work IMO, not aesthetically anyway.

    Nice blog but I think you could definitely improve the aesthetics!
     
    Matt B, Oct 3, 2008 IP
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    nice blog but can be further improve
     
    itdigital85, Jan 24, 2009 IP
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    river Active Member

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    The only thing I would do is to make the link colors brighter. The tan seems kind of faded. Other than the I like the site.
     
    river, Jan 24, 2009 IP