Hi. This is a sales page that has been modified a few times. I am launching this product officially in a few weeks and am continuing to play with the copy while testing. I am uncertain about the headline. The intent is to spark enough curiosity in the reader so they will read deep into the copy. Whether this is the style of writing you like or not, would it entice you to read on if you were in the "how to make money online" crowd? I have thick skin and would love any observations, comments or ideas. Feel free to be specific. The book and header are being redesigned so no need for those comments. Thanks.
My suggestions 1] removing the pop-up asking for email when you visit the page and putting it on the side somewhere [don't force it on them] 2] Change the headline to something simple and realistic like "Your step by step guide to daily profits" or something.
Hi, Nice copy. amoung all other things, I'd change the font to Arial. All the best, Lior Reuveni Smiley Marketing.