Critique of my logo?

Discussion in 'Design' started by odin93, Aug 9, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hey all,

    This is a logo I designed recently for a photographer. The wanted something classic yet modern so I decided to do a two font logo with a small specular highlight to divide them. Any thoughts?
     

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  2. awmnet

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    #2
    I don't know but it doesn't look like a logo for me...
     
    awmnet, Aug 12, 2012 IP
  3. plienine

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    #3
    Why not??! it is cool simple but the meaning is clear:) nice job.
     
    plienine, Aug 21, 2012 IP
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    #4
    How about Microsoft's logo? Does that not look like a logo to you either?

    Remember, a logo doesn't need to have fancy images. Even simple text can do, if formatted right.
     
    Witti, Aug 21, 2012 IP
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    #5
    Not that great but I think it's already good.

    Plus, I think it would look good as a small watermark on your pictures already.
     
    isababy, Aug 21, 2012 IP
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    #6
    I agree the logo looks more like a banner or a wallpaper
     
    HaiTai, Aug 22, 2012 IP
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    #7
    It's OK for as long as your customer is happy with it. Also show him a derivative: fill up the 2 v's (on top) and the y's cup (last letter on the bottom) with the color of the "small specular" (if he wants only 2 colors) or some other color (if 3 colors would do) and see what your customer says. Also post it here so we can compare
     
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    #8
    maybe try a different font as it's more a text logo and that font for the size is a bit in your face
     
    The spartan, Aug 22, 2012 IP
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    #9
    Needs to be more concise. How am I going to remember your name? Maybe just Yasterbov Photography..

    Review my website if you would guys... ChefChatter.com... I just launched it.. looking to get feedback
     
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    I like the suggestion on Brand Recall.

    I know the concern here is the logo. But, you should actually have found a way to create a name that's very easy to remember.
     
    isababy, Aug 23, 2012 IP
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    #11
    Being honest this logo have no spice at all, you should make your logo clean and spicy too so that it looks like a logo your logo is looking like a plain text
     
    perfectseopoint, Aug 24, 2012 IP
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    #12
    I really like the logo ..but If you can use different text then it would be nice..
    keep it up..
     
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    #13
    need a little bit improvement:) but keep it up!
     
    designfilo, Aug 25, 2012 IP
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    #14
    You should have a better logo for such a niche you should redesign it with better colors i dont think it really fits your niche
     
    computerkid, Aug 26, 2012 IP
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    #15
    not good your logo
     
    Irfi0009, Aug 26, 2012 IP
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    #16
    Its cery plane and simple logo you should have better iconic logo for such a niche of yours add more colors and shape or hire good logo designer to have a better logo
     
    webmyntra, Aug 28, 2012 IP
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    #17
    I suggest to use another font for the name of the photographer. Show us your progress after the changes.
     
    EmmaBrown, Aug 29, 2012 IP
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    #18
    typography....hehe,
    depend on how you use it...
    btw...it's nice, i like typo
     
    ayie.jaffar, Aug 30, 2012 IP
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    #19
    I would say its very simple logo for professional website or business you should have a professional logo try to have nice concept
     
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    #20
    It looks good, simple and to the point. But for some reason I kind of felt like it was shouting at me, maybe less caps in photography
     
    zombiepaw, Sep 18, 2012 IP