critique needed on my video.

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by tinman2207, Oct 21, 2007.

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    Hey Guys

    I have created a few videos and sold them on and now I am looking to get into the video market.

    I have created a new video and would appreciate your expert eye over it.

    http://www.rugeleyweb.com



    Tinman
     
    tinman2207, Oct 21, 2007 IP
  2. ZoharBlur

    ZoharBlur Banned

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    Good job, I like the voices and sounds in the video. Good luck to you!
     
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    Are you offering animated videos or live-action videos? Your site doesn't really make that clear. I know the example is an animation, but the way your site is worded, it could really mean either.

    I think you do nice work. The narration was of great quality but the actual animation lacked any real interest (sorry) and the lip-syncing was off on robot dude.
     
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    I have to agree with the above post. The video was great with regards to narration but somewhat the robot was not that eye grabbing.
     
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    Nice one! keep it up!
     
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    Thanks for your feedback guys.



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    tinman2207, Oct 23, 2007 IP