Critique My Squeeze Page Version 1 or 2 or what?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Globalp, Jun 21, 2012.

  1. #1
    Alright guys, about to start doing some solo ads and want to see if I can get some suggestions on the good ole squeeze page.

    I have 2 versions, the most recent here:


    http://www.karsononline.com/get-wp-optins/

    The first original version that I got the 2nd out of which needed some work here:

    http://www.karsononline.com/sa/get-wp-optins/

    I am thinking of split testing but I am looking for any suggestions you wanna add. New headline options, if you think it's too busy, or if 2 optin forms is too much....

    Let me know your thoughts! Constructive criticism or whatever!

    Oh and if you want the plugin don't sign up/optin I have it available for free at the moment at Karsononline.com

    Thanks!
     
    Globalp, Jun 21, 2012 IP
  2. Chris Wilson

    Chris Wilson Peon

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    When I first went on the page I got kinda confused (the most recent version). You are right it is kinda busy also. A squeeze page should basically have a headline and a opt in form (and maybe something free to give). Here is an example of a squeeze page I use that gets serious conversions http://bit.ly/LENewl and screen shot proof http://bit.ly/NJU9cFI learned this training from Russell Brunson Dot Com Secrets x. Also Daegan Smith (marketer who get 65% optin rates) says use the "thristy deer" technique. People approach squeeze pages like a thirsty deer. They see the brook and they want to drink, but deers are very skiddish and the least little thing causes them them to flee. another example http://bit.ly/LZyXuK
     
    Chris Wilson, Jun 26, 2012 IP
  3. Cybercon

    Cybercon Active Member

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    I like the /sa/get-wp-optins/ version but would recommend you add the YouTube video to it
     
    Cybercon, Jun 27, 2012 IP
  4. NicheBacklinks.co

    NicheBacklinks.co Active Member

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    To be honest I like the first one more, but it doesn't mean I would ever sign up. There are too many colours on this one small page.
    2nd link has less going on but it looks very squashed as well. This bit here FREE Step-by-Step Video Tutorials has both capital letters and normal letters, yellow background, text in red, and underlined. 4 things to stand out, compared to just normal black text, way too much going on with just 1 sentence.
     
    NicheBacklinks.co, Jun 28, 2012 IP
  5. ukdrew

    ukdrew Greenhorn

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    Use AAX to build a squeeze page...
     
    Last edited: Jul 9, 2012
    ukdrew, Jul 9, 2012 IP
  6. Chris Wilson

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    Russell Brunson's 90 second squeeze page creator is the best I have used so far. It's the fastest for sure. I just created a member snap squeeze page with a video and got 1 opt in so far. Just sent out some solos.
     
    Chris Wilson, Jul 9, 2012 IP