Critique My Sales Copy

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by vwillis, Mar 14, 2009.

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    I have just launched a new website which I did the copy for myself. What I want to know is if it follows the pattern a professional copywriter would do. Click here to see site
     
    vwillis, Mar 14, 2009 IP
  2. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice site looks professional. Try to enlarge the logo and make the title into more attractive..
     
    2advance, Mar 16, 2009 IP