Critique my landing page

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by wvstephens, Jun 9, 2009.

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    Ok I created a new landing page for a product I am going to start promoting. I need some tips on what everyone thinks. Be brutal, cause honesty is best.

    Thanks in advance.

    Link: http://xterminators.net/
     
    wvstephens, Jun 9, 2009 IP
  2. tanakanewyork

    tanakanewyork Guest

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    I always see outbreak of Bedbugs in the US movies, they are big and intelligent and they start to attack the Earth and human beings.

    If your product is something like chemical product, then that would help people. If something like ebook, I dont think the affiliates would have interest to promote. That is what I think.
     
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    javaongsan Well-Known Member

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    nice LP, clean layout.
     
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  4. knight1

    knight1 Peon

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    Nice pictures and decent layout. Remember to always tell the benefits of why they should get product!

    My next tip would have to be instead of the "click here to get ebook" on bottom, I've found that if you put a link that says--- Click here to learn more about etc... works better. Then they don't know if they are going to a sales page. they think they might just be going to another page of your site to learn more. Make the hyperlink on bottom stand out a little more instead of the small text and bold it.

    One other thing maybe, if you have them. Add some graphics to it. They tend to increase the clickthru rate. IMO

    cheers!
     
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    cri8bat Well-Known Member

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    nice landing page!

    I would suggest to clock the links :)
     
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  6. wvstephens

    wvstephens Active Member

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    Thanks to everyone for the help. It was late last night and I did not get to cloak the link. It is a product I am testing I don't know how far it will go. I am a Pest Professional so I thought it would be something I know... I will implement the changes you all have suggested. To see what happens.

    Thanks again.
     
    wvstephens, Jun 10, 2009 IP