Critique my landing page/cb product in general!

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by jimminy64, Mar 9, 2011.

  1. #1
    Sup guys? I was going to launch this product on clickbank before starcraft 2 came out. Had a guy write me up a guide all nicely and ended up getting ripped off in the end, never actually receiving the product so I just gave up (stupid move).

    Anyway, can you take a look at the landing page? Affiliate section? Just want to know if I was on the right track to having a nice product, may attempt it again in the future :p

    http://www.starsupremacy.com
    http://www.starsupremacy.com/affiliates.html
    http://starsupremacy.com/earlybird.html (early launch section, the game wasnt out yet)
     
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    jimminy64, Mar 9, 2011 IP
  2. Clintin

    Clintin Well-Known Member

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    Okay, the first two links do not work... The last link works. You missed spelled the first two links. You forgot your "p"
     
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  3. jimminy64

    jimminy64 Member

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    Haha got it, thanks. Not going to leave an opinion?
     
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    itek4bux Greenhorn

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    I think you are on the right track! I like your landing page as it doesn't look like the typical "sales" landing page.

    Did you set yourself up as a vendor on ClickBank?
     
    itek4bux, Mar 9, 2011 IP
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    bestmate Active Member

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    I would use a white backgrouns for the text so it is easier to read and you also need a more polished eBook image that stands out. cheers.
     
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  6. jimminy64

    jimminy64 Member

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    Thanks for the advice, no I haven't signed up to be a vendor as this isn't going to be released. Will do so when I have a product I will release.
     
    jimminy64, Mar 9, 2011 IP