Critique My Facebook Fan page/Email Opt-In Page... Please.

Discussion in 'Facebook' started by mcbrett, Sep 12, 2010.

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  2. DJinBoise

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    It doesn't stand out compared to other fan pages I've seen. It's not bad but I just think it needs something more to pop and stand out. There isn't call to action or suggest they "Like" your page. Here's one that I think really stands out http://www.facebook.com/#!/marismith?v=app_351221792913.

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    i agree with it.
     
    unknownpray, Sep 13, 2010 IP