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Critique my design please!

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by sburton0, Jul 7, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hello! I am working on a website for a new project I am working on.
    http://sburton0.50webs.com/extmod/
    It's just a simple layout with a couple of CSS3 effects. It's not entirely finished yet, but it's almost there. What do you guys think?
     
    sburton0, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  2. ValDeV

    ValDeV Member

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    #2
    The center image is abit boring and going with gray on gray is nothing interesting. Id advise for more images but if your aiming for pure simplicity it might be best.

    Id say 2/5 in uniqueness
    And a 1/5 in interestingness (its a word now)
    4/5 in simplicity
     
    ValDeV, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  3. Jeehan

    Jeehan Well-Known Member

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    #3
    1/5 overall
     
    Jeehan, Jul 7, 2010 IP
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    aap Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Looks cool and very impressive. But you need to complete it, it has just only homepage.
    Good work :)
     
    aap, Jul 7, 2010 IP
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    Asgeco Member

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    I would give 1/5. You need to work more on that phone or whatever it is.
     
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  6. sburton0

    sburton0 Greenhorn

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    Thanks guys. I was going for simplicity. I'll try to work on the phone. Any other suggestions?
     
    sburton0, Jul 7, 2010 IP
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    NPSF3000 Peon

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    #7
    Text is bland - you need a better font.

    If your going for simplicity vertically center it.

    Footer needs to be smaller - less obtrusive.
     
    NPSF3000, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  8. sburton0

    sburton0 Greenhorn

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    Thanks, I'll work on it. Any suggestions on fonts?
     
    sburton0, Jul 7, 2010 IP
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    anands Well-Known Member

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    #9
    Buttons on the right can have a bit more feel if they are in some other color (say mild red or bright orange?).

    Any logo in the top middle would be better than just plain text.

    Hope this helps.
     
    anands, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  10. sburton0

    sburton0 Greenhorn

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    Thanks!
    I've changed the buttons, what do you guys think?
     
    sburton0, Jul 7, 2010 IP
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    NPSF3000 Peon

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    Nope, im a coder - but i'm liking what you did with the footer(Possible make it a size or two smaller).
     
    NPSF3000, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  12. sburton0

    sburton0 Greenhorn

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    Thanks I will see what I can do :)
     
    sburton0, Jul 8, 2010 IP
  13. iseeyourunderwear

    iseeyourunderwear Peon

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    #13
    Might want to tone down the yellow sun it is very hard on the eyes difficult to see the rest of the web page . Not sure what the site is about on this home page unless it is the TX weather channel.
     
    iseeyourunderwear, Jul 8, 2010 IP
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    phpmatt Peon

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    The text on the phone looks like it should be a working menu, I tried to click it. Is it going to be a menu?
     
    phpmatt, Jul 8, 2010 IP
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    Lizzys Peon

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    #15
    I agree with phpmatt, the text on the phone looks like it should be a working menu - and I actually think it would be cool if it was. One way to differentiate them from being links is to use a non-web font on your real button links. That would give your website some more character, and also create a style for real links versus plain text. You definitely nailed simplicity - and since that's what you're going for, that's a good thing. I agree with others that you should work on the phone a bit - since it is the main focus on your website, you'll want to make sure you put a good amount of detail into it. I think the footer would look better if it was either right aligned with the buttons or left aligned with the phone, it sort of feels like it's floating in the middle of no where right now.

    Hope that helps. :)
     
    Lizzys, Jul 8, 2010 IP
  16. sburton0

    sburton0 Greenhorn

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    Thanks for the suggestions :)
    The phone is supposed to be representative of the new project I'm working on. It is going to be a web application that is extensible and modular to any platform. I will be releasing a beta soon.

    I've modified the phone image
     
    sburton0, Jul 8, 2010 IP
  17. iseeyourunderwear

    iseeyourunderwear Peon

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    Looking much better, just need to balance the page and simple elegant design complete.
     
    iseeyourunderwear, Jul 8, 2010 IP
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    WWWheels Peon

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    #18
    Looks good, keep it up, will review again once you develop more of the site
     
    WWWheels, Jul 8, 2010 IP
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    #19
    Why the negativity? I love the simplicity.
     
    subdivisions, Jul 8, 2010 IP
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    Claymation Peon

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    #20
    I was about to code a page, and realized it wasn't going to be SEO-friendly.
    Something tells me yours likely isn't.
    I love the active menu idea for the phone image though.
    My first thought as well.
     
    Claymation, Jul 8, 2010 IP