Critique my business card design

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by ibrahimzcl, Oct 15, 2008.

  1. skateme

    skateme Peon

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    #21
    Change the URL font to something more readable :). The card looks absolutely AMAZING otherwise.
     
    skateme, Oct 20, 2008 IP
  2. tiffanyjewelry

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    #22
    i really liked your business card but i agree that you should be using more clear fonts for giving your information in front.
     
    tiffanyjewelry, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  3. Anna X

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    #23
    I would suggest using a little more lighter colour tone for business rather than the heavy dark tone.
    The wood-grain print is nifty anyway.

    Regarding the circle and the kanji character:
    â—¯ <- The circular brush stroke is nice.
    禅 (Zen) <- The font is not nice.. My suggestion is to use a brush style font, or something other than a plain sans-serif font.

    Overall, it is an interesting business card...
    Keep up the good work. :)
     
    Anna X, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  4. QiSoftware

    QiSoftware Well-Known Member

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    #24
    Elegant. I like them.

    Q...
     
    QiSoftware, Oct 21, 2008 IP
  5. ace.brian

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    #25
    Looks cool! Fonts easy to read, interesting design, but may be a little more lighter colour tone would be better?! In my opinion...
     
    ace.brian, Oct 21, 2008 IP