Critique for my blogs

Hey guys I'm new here and am astounded by the amount of the great advice I'm reading here.

I'm starting a Ukrainian dating site and I've set 3 blogs: 1 about dating internationally (with empahsis on Ukraine), 2 general updates for the dating site in question 3 on internet marketing and using the Ukrainian dating site as a test case (I can place links).

This is my first dive into internet marketing so this is all new to me. I've done a keyword competitive research (fiverr) and buying some backlinks (fiverr also). I'm trying my best not to spam but it's best to just have a link: http://marketing.mobilewebsites.la I was also concerned if the blog seemed too heavily stuffed with keywords, and also it seems like no one would really read it.

Thanks guys.

 

Can you please send your site and blog links.

 

I see your given page marketing(dot)mobilewebsites(dot)la and what I get is not good. Very troublesome to read because of your writing style or paragraph style. Look at something that change the text paragraph style, alignment style, font, add image or video. I mean make your text more nice and interesting to read. Also make the environment or page style to more eye catchy or easy or colorful or interesting.

Actually your page looking bored. Please do not mind for my comment. Take my comment positively and change or modify your web page style and beauty. Make it more beautiful.