Critique and Advice on my new Clickbank design

It started as a request however I didnt finish it yet,

I do not deal with e-marketing so I dont know what content this page should include.

help will be appreciated,



Tom

 

White page with white outline is not looking okay. Improve it.

 

I really like the way the yellow pen highlights part of the headline...will really emphasize a certain point. Other than that, I recommend you check with the person who requested it to see what they would like included.

 

Nice work has been done i really like the red arrow the way it is indicating to the video bar.Please remove border from the center white color box it was not looking so good.The main blue box "milloin dollar business" can look more highlighted and nice if you can add some outer glow on that with white colour.Over all it was great keep it up.Thanks

 

i think if it is in english language it will be more effective.n many people will come to you

 

Not bad, i would get rid of the transparent box behind the logo.. I'm sure you did it to lighten it up... but it just looks like crap there.

Other than that its clean. good job