Critic My Blog

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by Jonathan99, Jan 27, 2009.

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    Jonathan99, Jan 27, 2009 IP
  2. Game Producer

    Game Producer Well-Known Member

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    #2
    1) Dunno what's the site about (selling some stuff to me?) - how about a slogan/headerbanner or something? :)
    2) .tk is... well, .tk :)
    3) powered by google sites? uh... it seems bit bland. :)

    Worked pretty fast though... but you could improve on thinking why would people want to go there (and revisit) :)
     
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  3. error666

    error666 Greenhorn

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    #3
    .tk Domain is free...
    The Blogdesign seems ugly...
    But welcome & have fun here i think you will get better.
     
    error666, Jan 27, 2009 IP
  4. kozyavka

    kozyavka Active Member

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    #4
    the design is ugly, have to agree. Why don't you use any free templates that you can find everywhere? I have recently created a self-defense blog, and I used the template
     
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    bobbym Well-Known Member

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    #5
    humm, you need more work for your site. keep up and you will be good.
     
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    #6
    You may want to look at blogs that are more professional looking for ideas, and start from scratch.

    You like that domain?
     
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    Neticule Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Starting from scratch is a good idea, get more content and work on a nicer design. There are many great resources on the net that should get you started making your own theme, or if you dont want to do that there are many great free themes available.
     
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    It's not that good. You would be better off promoting your program with a well written article and an affiliate link.
     
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    Romanorc Active Member

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    #9
    It appears to me that English is not your native language. I can only speak and write in English so I'm no scholar but you need to get someone to help you there.

    Also, it's a bit disjointed with too many font changes.

    Good luck.
     
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    Sxperm Notable Member

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    #10
    Your site does not looked like a blog at all. It just looked like an old long sales page, like the most "make money" site elsewhere. I bet you just posted here a link to gain your traffic and do not want any critic because you already know that your site is not that good.

    - The header is very ugly and a waste of space. If you are selling something and need to convince people to buy the product, you need more professional looking of your header
    - Even I am not an english native speaking but your english is not good. Need some improvement there

    1/5 from me. Many hard works needed on your site.
     
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  11. Blahzay

    Blahzay Well-Known Member

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    Not sure what its about but it does need a new header asap. Preferably a new design altogether.
     
    Blahzay, Jan 27, 2009 IP