"Cringe" Be nice lol can you review my sales page please!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by maccam87, Jul 1, 2010.

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    Hello guys, I hate posting to the review sections so please be nice, but honest lol!

    First of all I have been blogging for a good few years now and I am trying to share what I have learnt through an e-book, the thing is - I am not a web designer or a killer sales man and I have done the whole thing myself which I am very proud of.

    So I am asking the experts of DP, can I have some constructive critasim please!

    Thanks alot guys :D and try not to be to nasty please :D

    http://www.blog2success.co.uk
     
    Last edited: Jul 1, 2010
    maccam87, Jul 1, 2010 IP
  2. Mafia Penguin

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    #2
    Where's the link? D:
     
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  3. Imozeb

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    #3
    I would add a nav bar and split up your content.
     
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  4. maccam87

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    nav bar? could you explain please!
     
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    #5
    the sales page is just what i expected it to be.
     
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  6. Mafia Penguin

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    #6
    You wouldn't need a Nav bar if you only have one page (The Nav bar is a menu bar with buttons like Home, About Us, etc.. on), Anyway, I know you said be nice (sorry ;P) ...But when i look at your website I immediately think. Scam!

    It's not just the content but the design as a whole. If you really want to sell your product you need a proper website. For example, one like this.... http://www.coremediadesign.co.uk/

    Obviously you haven't got a whole company going and you are only selling a few products, however if you structure your website that way you will certainly get more business and the first impression of Scam will disappear.

    As you said, your not a website designer. But CSS and PHP isn't hard to learn, it just takes a few weeks.

    Good Luck with your website, and i hope some of that helped. :)
     
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  7. maccam87

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    hehe no worrys thanks for the tips
     
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  8. moaeyana

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    #8
    I really could not find anything that separates from the clutter. All that you find is a long single page. This is definitely not expected from a person who claims to be an expert on blogging.
     
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    #9
    There were a number of typos/misspelled words, which can affect your credibility. I would recommend spending more time proofreading the site. Best of luck to you.
     
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    #10
    Yucks, Yikess, :p
    Just kidding.
    but yes how are you going to create a niche, it like dime to dozen sites around
     
    hyefaith, Jul 2, 2010 IP