Contest Creative Logo Contest: $60 for 1st place, $15 for 2nd place, $5 for 3rd place /specific instructions

Entry:

 

my entry ! please do give feedback!

 

Thanks for the feedback

 

feedback pls

 

@sushant1221: thank you, but the design style just doesn't fit well for what I'm looking for. Too much going on and I'm not a fan of the fonts.
@khai budz: thanks, but that's much too busy for me.
@ataks: thanks, but this is not the type of style I'm looking for. And please don't use the company name in the image file as I asked for in my instructions. I am disqualifying people who are not following instructions.
@BOB Designs: thank you for the variations. I like #4 the most. I like the letters normal, but I appreciate the creativity. I would prefer something darker (more black) and a different font variation.
@chander1: thanks, but this style is not what I am looking for.
@mrphotoshop90: thanks, this is ok for now - I prefer the darker one because in the second one you're still keeping the horizontal line. I might ask for font variations later on but waiting for now on others.
@FlashD: thanks, I like this design and style, but I'm not fully set on the font. See below on some fonts I like.
@Woles: thanks, but it doesn't beat out other submissions.

I'm still looking for more submissions that will WOW me!

Also when you are all doing fonts, I think maybe it might help if I give you guidance on the fonts that I like - play with these to see which you think looks best with your design:
Karla
Merriweather Sans
Varela
Inder
PT Sans
ABeeZee

 

Revision:

 

Aah... I'm really sorry about that.
Now I cant remove it either.
My bad.

And, different fonts here.

 

Revised version :



I used Varela,ABeeZee,Karla and Inder respectively.

 

Thanks For your feedback
Here is some font variations

 

I'm still waiting on more entries before continuing commentary...

 

@FlashD: Thanks for the font edits. I actually like your original the most with font: http://s1078.photobucket.com/user/FlashD21/media/333v_zpsf74fdcea.png.html
But I would like you to edit the frame a little that is holding the tiles. It looks OK on screen but if I look at it on mobile device or a lot-contrast screen then I cannot really see that there is a frame around the tiles. It looks like one big block of black with the white letters. So maybe you can make the frame lighter to increase the contrast. Maybe going more into a grey color. Thanks.

I have no other comments on other submissions for now.

 

hi

-Mr.Nag

 

Revision:

 

Thank You for the feedback.
I created three version, let me know which one you like.
Thank You

 

Contest has ended.
First place: @FlashD
Second place: @mrphotoshop90
Third place: @Mr.Nag

Congratulations!
Thank you all for the great work and fantastic submissions. Thank you to everyone else for participating.
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