Craigslist ad redesign

I want to redesign my ad. use your imagination each one that I like I pay $20 immediately by PP. I will take the top 10.

 

Hi. Thanks for the contest. Here is my first entry...

 

send PP request to for 20$

 

interested, working on it

 

Here is mine..How is it?



Thanks

 

nice send PP request then make nice comments here and itrader please.....

 

Fast payment, nice working with you

 

here is mine..

 

red part is kind of dull make it clearer.....take out the car put in something else and lets change the wording a little so I have some variations.

TIm

 

here is my revision..



looks better??

 

Check your pm sir

Thanks

 

Thank you. Request sent. Here is another...



Ah, I just saw your comment to another designer about changing the wording. I will change this one and post the revision.

 

Here you go...

 

My Entry:
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I'll remove the sample watermark once you approve it. Thanks.
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approve send PP request nice

 

paid in full

 

all requests now paid........

 

Thank you. Left positive iTrader. Here is another. I went a little different direction by targeting family-oriented individuals.

 

Thanks..payment received and nice contest..itrade added

 

Is this contest still on??

Here is my entry: