Craigslist Ad Design revamp in progress, Please Review

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by artguy51, Feb 22, 2009.

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    I have been creating craigslist type image ads for awhile now and felt the site needed a rework.
    Could you please leave some comments on the revamp and what would get you to purchase an ad.

    fastimageads.com

    for some reason the link function isn't working tonight.

    Thanks

    Guy
     
    artguy51, Feb 22, 2009 IP
  2. monosodium

    monosodium Well-Known Member

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    Overall, good job. There are a few adjustments that sprint to mind. Your main catch is "Now is the time to advertise on craigslist" and your minor copy is "Craigslist is huge and free advertising for your local or global business" which is odd - you are pitching craigslist as a resource. Leave that to craigslist (not that they need to do any pitching). Instead, pitch your own services as a resource.

    For example, push the notion that image ads can make a big difference. Or that you can create powerful ads. And so on.
     
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  3. artguy51

    artguy51 Active Member

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    Great suggestion, I know it is not the right message to place there and I agree one hundred percent. I think I got so caught up in my own design I dropped some of the good stuff from my old page and it referenced exactly that.

    Thanks.

    Any more is appreciated.
    I have always been much better at creating things for others and not so much for myself.
     
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  4. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice design and great images. I found that the first two menu items are displayed in small letters and the other three (FAQ, Order and Contact) are displayed as caps, try to make all the menu items as same type.
     
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  5. TommySC

    TommySC Peon

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    Guy makes excellent ADs btw. I've been using him for months and recommend him to anyone who asks.
    The man can make an AD that pops... that's for sure.
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