Could someone review my terms of service and help me word it better?

Could someone review my terms of service and help me word it better?

Link: http://www.foreverplaying.com/script/terms.php

Thank you.

 

The first thing I would do would make it readable. Black text on a dark green background is too hard to read.

 

Sorry about that, I was testing some css styles. Check it out now; the text should be white.

 

Still hard to read green on green..

 

How about now? The text should be very white with just the slightest hint of green. If it is still not readable could you suggest a color which I should use. Thank you.

 

I have read it over a few times and I would like suggestions from other people. Could someone check it out at http://www.foreverplaying.com/script/terms.php

Thanks.

 

the terms are okay but you should at least make the font a little smaller. it spread out my monitor

 

What is your screen resolution?