Could somebody review my Worldwide Moving site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by gerdywerdy, Jul 27, 2008.

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    www.gemrelocations.com

    can you let me know what you think of the logo, layout especially

    many thanks everyone

    G
     
    gerdywerdy, Jul 27, 2008 IP
  2. xanadu

    xanadu Well-Known Member

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    The logo looks nice but I think it's a bit too big, and you have a gradient/drop-shadow at the bottom that looks out of place. Good job, though.
     
    xanadu, Jul 27, 2008 IP
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    I agree logo is to big.. reduce it 50%, increase the font size of the site.
    The buttons/links need to look a lot more finished.
     
    malice95, Jul 27, 2008 IP
  4. gerdywerdy

    gerdywerdy Member

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    I agree with you guys

    I am definitly not happy with the logo

    Malice what do you mean by "finished"

    thanks
     
    gerdywerdy, Jul 27, 2008 IP
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    The logo is a little loud, large and bright it takes too much for my eyes to adjust from the logo to the rest of the site. I would probably look better if you turn down the opacity or put a dim filter on the globe and make it a bit smaller.

    I like the colors, the font size is a too small and gradient bar on the bottom looks bad like it is a like a repeating background problem or something.

    But all in all it looks good looks like after some tweaking and adjusting it will be clean and professional looking. Nice job

    I like the clocks. How does the second hand go around?
     
    resto, Jul 28, 2008 IP
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    I have to agree with Resto on the points they made. Also, on your "Contact Us" page there is nothing but an e-mail link. You really need to put in Real contact information (i.e company address, phone number). I think the concept is great but you also need to put some work in on your SEO.
     
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  7. gerdywerdy

    gerdywerdy Member

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    the contqact page is in development

    should be updated soon

    I ahave somebody working on a new logo

    and some new images

    thanks for all the help guys
     
    gerdywerdy, Jul 28, 2008 IP
  8. gerdywerdy

    gerdywerdy Member

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    Hi there

    Have made a few changes

    what do you all think now

    new logo
    new clocks

    thankls for the help from the guys on the board for this

    so what you all think now

    thanks
     
    gerdywerdy, Aug 14, 2008 IP
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    I like it. It looks professional. The clocks are a nice touch. The color scheme works.
     
    RoyDixon, Aug 14, 2008 IP
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    One point, you use the company too often in your copy.. "G.E.M. Relocations" is so long that it really gets irksome in a hurry. You might try using either "G.E.M." or "Relocations" after the first time.

    G.E.M. Relocations has knowledgeable professionals to provide you with the best in customer satisfaction. G.E.M. has set itself apart from the competition by striving for excellence and making customer satisfaction our #1 priority.

    Once you make a choice, stick with that one choice and rely on pronouns to split up the monotony.

    Contact G.E.M. Relocations at +353-1-5262845 could become: Contact us at +353-1-5262845 or Our 24 hour hotline number is +353-1-5262845 or Reach our office by calling +353-1-5262845
     
    talewins, Aug 15, 2008 IP
  11. gerdywerdy

    gerdywerdy Member

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    thanks for the copywriting tips

    will change it later today

    many thanks

    thanks for the positive review
     
    gerdywerdy, Aug 16, 2008 IP