Could anyone tell me if this looks good?

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by mv5869, Aug 25, 2008.

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    I would really appreciate a quick review of four pages I have written on a new Roulette System at my UK gambling site.

    I used to sell this as an eBook and recently decided I couldn't be bothered selling & posting the CDs anymore and that actually it might make some good original content for my site.

    The start page is: Best Roulette System FREE - How to win at roulette (http://www.playhard.co.uk/best-roulette-system.php)

    I'd appreciate feedback on:
    1. Style of writing / general credibility
    2. Navigation between the four pages that describe the system
    3. Overall impression / Pain points etc.

    Just to clarify I am asking for a review of these four pages in particular, rather than the whole site in general.

    Thanks in advance.
     
    mv5869, Aug 25, 2008 IP