could anyone give tips about my landing page for registry programs?

i am promoting 3 registry softwares got from CB.

could anyone give tips about my landing page?

http://users7.nofeehost.com/walle321

 

Registry products have one key thing which make them sell quite well, that is the free download option. Most of the registry products on CB have a download option, and when the user downloads and installs the software it will run a scan. After the scan it will conclude how many registry errors it has found in the users computer, however to get rid of these errors the user must purchase the full version of the product. As the user is already half way to cleaning his/her registry and sees how many problems his/her registry actually has he/she is much more inclined to buy the product.

Baring this in mind you should set out your landing page something like this:

LOGO - I'm sure you can whip up something good in a quick photoshop round, if not just use the header as your LOGO instead.

HEADER - Make this eye catching, use bold and underline where possible to grab the readers attention as much as possible.

ABOVE THE FOLD LINK - Here is where you'll place your above the fold DOWNLOAD LINK for your main product you're trying to sell. Make sure that this link is considerably larger then the other links further down and that it speaks more to the reader, so instead of just saying "DOWNLOAD NOW TO FIX REGISTRY" have something like "GET YOUR PC BACK FASTER THAN EVER - DOWNLOAD NOW!".

BRIEFING - Give a brief introduction intro what the system registry is, how it can get messed up, what effects the messing up will have and then finish by stating what the registry product will do for the person.

REVIEWS - Here is probably the most important part of your lander, this is the point where you review each product, give ratings etc. Make sure to place a nice fat DOWNLOAD NOW link at the bottom of each review.

FAQ - After the last review don't end the landing page, put a few F.A.Q. questions at the bottom so it trails on for a bit longer then just the last review.

Best of luck mate .

Oh and P.S. I really hope that domain is just for show of your first landing page, and that you're not going to be driving traffic to what I would call I sub-sub domain .

 

Second that, I have look at your page, it is not a professional landing page for registry cleaner products.

 

I'm not an expert on landing pages, but there are a few questions I have:

1 - What product Are you selling? All I see is a page with all these links out...wait, i just clicked on a link, and then there's another link with a top three.

Ok, so you have something going on. Make the TOP three page your landing page. But you need work on that - you actually have a lot of great content on the TOP THREE page, however I'd work on making it cleaner and come up with a more professional design.