I recently launched this new website www.articleblast.net I hired someone to write the sales letter but i am not sattisfied I am writing here to find a copywriter with the talent to write kick-ass sales letter. If anyone interested please contact me
Did you know that on your "about us" page, you have a link to a PayPal order-form?! It's not going to be too easy to get Clickbank affiliates if you're also offering a non-Clickbank payment option on the same website, you know? Just saying ...
Yeah right!!! I removed the payment links from the about us page, but it was for some other products not the same here
Who ever you do hire to " Fix " this website. I'd tell them to put in a good call to action, which your site right now doesn't. And a good P.S., even two of them, for the prospects that like to scan the page. You reinforce your big benefit and your " baby " headline in your P.S. Good luck, Brett
That's a good point, but there may be a way around it. A quick check in php for a url variable to see if the user is from a ClickBank affiliate. If so - drop a cookie to mark them. Wherever you show payment forms/links - check for this cookie and output the correct form. It would ensure that when ClickBank affiliate send you traffic the transaction always goes through CB and your other one would be used for the rest. Thanks for mentioning this as it will apply to something I'm working on.
Being no "guru", I think your landing page looks really strange. Whoever has written that sales page for you has missed the point completely, I think. I can't see even the simplest form of FAB analysis... Furthermore, the voice speaking from the copy is all about you, as a business, rather than about "them", your customers... Try a re-write, you can get a much better copy for sure. P.S. Check your "About Us" page, there are some spelling mistakes.