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@LoserXP I don't like the current revision. When i said space in between the text, i mean to the left of "OFF" and right of "AVE".. not in between each word, sorry. I also don't like the design of the new one. Could you revert back to this design except place the crown on the left side and with the new "F" font?



Could you remove the cracks in the text and lastly, could you add the EQ bars or EQ lines somewhere behind the text.. like KREZ's?

@Drama9Url: Could you make the font bigger, place the mixtapes under "AVE" and add the EQ bars or EQ lines somewhere behind the text.. like KREZ's?

 

I've made the changes. Let me know if you want me to change anything else.

 

Looks good. Space out "OFF" and "THE" a little more because "THE" is overlapping it too much. Could you move the EQ bars over to the right and make them smaller in width? Lastly, could you make the dark gray background that "OFF THE AVE" sits over exactly like gray you have in the demo i just posted, color, size and spacing?

Let's see how the modifications look.

 

Oh yeah, and i noticed the line to the right of the 3 stars looks a little different from the line in the demo i posted above. Could you also restore the line in your next demo to look like the demo i posted above, except stretch the line to the end of "AVE"?

Thanks!

 

Is this what you're looking for?

 

Sorry, you wanted the original text from to replace the current one?

 

yeah, something like that. i'm not sure if i'll want the EQ bars to stay that color, give me a short while to ponder it. i'm trying to find a better font for the f's. could you try this font for the f's?

http://www.dafont.com/amsterdam-graffiti.font?fpp=50&text=OFF+THE+AVE

One small request. Could you add another one with a red "AVE" alongside of the blue "AVE". I'd like to see which one looks the best on the site. Could you lastly make "OFF THE" the same height as "AVE"?

 

no no, the current text you have in the current one is fine.

 

I changed the font

 

working on my revisions now =)

 

Could you make "OFF THE" the same height as "AVE" and change "AVE" to the red you used in your one?

 

^ you didn't have to change the EQ colors.. sorry. Could you revert the EQ bars to White and Blue? Could you also try moving the "O" in "OFF" over to the left a tiny bit?

 

required size

 

@Drama: could you make the text bigger and drop the background? Could you also bring the EQ bars closer to each other?

@Loser: It looked better with the red EQ bars. Could you make the "AVE" a little bit more red? Could you also drop the background? I'd like to see what it would look like without a bg.

 

Without a background




Tweeted it

 

^ the first and second one look good, the new red is more vibrant. but you forgot the EQ bars on the one without the bg. so could you add the EQ bars to the 2nd one?