Convincing Landing Page?

Discussion in 'Affiliate Programs' started by geniosity, Oct 25, 2006.

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    Hi all. I need a little help. I have a landing page for PPC that leads off to an affiliate.

    But, it doesn't look like the visitors are convinced it's any good, cos no-ones clicking through...

    Now, I know this is my first attempt and all, but how on EARTH do you make a good "middle-man" page without creating one of those HUGELY ugly and incredibly long affiliate pages?

    I would love it if you could give me guidance on how to start properly.

    thanks. ANY comments would be helpful (even some constructive criticism)

    http://easymoney.geniosity.co.za/emusic/
     
    geniosity, Oct 25, 2006 IP
  2. ManifestAMillion

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    Hey geniosity,
    Good to see you having a crack:)

    Anyway my initial thoughts are that you should write it more as a review. You want visitors to see YOU as a real person and not just describing a product. You should tell it more as a story like HOW you found out about the site, why you liked it and why they should also give it a try.

    something like" Like many of you I was sick and tired of having to pay $20 for a cd or $2 to buy a song in Itunes. So I began looking for ways to download for free that wasn't Illegal. Unfortunaly I DIDN'T find it so if you do then let me know. However I found the next best thing...a program that enables you to download a song for roughly 25c each. As I said...if there's a better way out there PLEASE LET ME KNOW...."

    Something like that would work alot better I feel.

    At the moment it's not really catching my attention.


    If you would like some help then feel free to PM me.
     
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  3. geniosity

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    Thanks for the reply... I was actually planning on going that route, but then I thought it would be too personal...
     
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    I wold also make it really professional looking. If you make something that looks like a one man show people will not trust it. However if you make something that looks professional, and created by a large organization people are more likely to trust it and look around.

    Hope this helps some

    Chris
     
    EZ-Forex, Oct 25, 2006 IP