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Like the straight edges better, we need to work on colors. I'd like a black, white, shades of gray but not a black background. The font for the name is good.Keep the font.

Will you also create a version with straight edges and the same font as your black and white using PurePurple's colors (blue/violet/gray silver). See the gray business card in her submission from Tuesday.

 

Thanks for the new version, but I prefer elements of the original. I'm going to reply to your original post. See further comments there.

 

I like the color scheme of the the logo on the gray business card. Color looks blue/violet/with silver gray accents.Would be great for a business card with foil or embossing.
Can you use that color scheme and only give me the i with the semi circle to the right of the the dot and the swoosh starting on the left? The other initials aren't working with the design the i but I like the i alone.

 

Thanks for your entry. It is classic but still different than the other classic submissions. I am looking for something that is a little different. I like how clean your work is.

 

Feedback Please

 

Thanks for the Feedback ... i will post the new version .

 

another try

 

Thanks or submitting again.
I like it. I got a couple of ideas after seeing your entry. I looked for some images on the internet to try to explain what I'm thinking so you can add your own creativity. The picture just makes it easier to explain.

1) Can you make the outer circle a thin gear piece with im inside of the circle. Leave space between it, so it is not flushed like the image in the link below. I don't want people to think engineering or physics.
http://previews.123rf.com/images/dr...bol-in-gear-wheel--3d-illustration-letter.jpg

I'm trying to convey that she is the missing piece, the missing link, or the bright idea or smarts to a corporation's strategy.

2) Can you also have a version where you leave the image as you submitted it but try versions replacing the dot of the i with:

• a gear piece
• a puzzle piece
• a star (not a religious star. see this as an example: http://en.es-static.us/upl/2011/02/sirius_600.jpg) This may be not print well though.
• a linked double circle: (something like http://site.iugaza.edu.ps/elmanama/files/2010/02/colour_links.jpg)

I also thought of the dot on the i being replaced by a light bulb or brain is just creepy unless done really well.

Thanks.

 

Ok, thank you for your feedbacks, here's the revisions with 5 variations.

 

v1.



V2.

 

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any feedback for the entry! no # 1 the first one you can see. You have replied to every entry except for mine! will wait for your reply! thank you.

 

Thank you for the feedback. New entry with color revisions:

 

Hello. Thanks for submitting and apologies for delayed response to this thread. I have been dealing with a priority situation.
The submission is not what I have in mind and I'm not sure what feedback I can provide to improve it. A fresh start may be better.

 

I like these. You picked up on some elements that I suggested to other entries and incorporated them here. I wonder how the gradient lettering would print on a white background and how it would look embossed or debossed?

 

I like the versions on the business card with the silver M. It would be good for foil. I need to think about the new color scheme a little more.

 

I like hiding the M inside the I. Creative. I can't help but feeling like Adobe software. The colors are also like Adobe.