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The design is very simple, most of the text on the page is too large you should consider making it smaller. You should get some pictures and some testimonials of satisfied customers.
you need a lot of work. you need a logo a new design and the content needs to be organized some more. page too long as well lost interest very quick.
Like it. Nice clean text, easy to read. Maybe more "Buy it now" buttons through out the text so people can jump to the purchase
If i were you I would split it up into multiple pages, possibly FAQ style. I'm allergic to such long pages, but then again I'm allergic to buying most ebooks i see.