comment needed on my 1st work

Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by Hallaboy, Aug 26, 2008.

  1. ggraphics

    ggraphics Member

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    #21
    ITs Good But it Have No Shine
    You USe Bright COlors
    And Make more contrass
     
    ggraphics, Aug 30, 2008 IP
  2. allancass

    allancass Active Member

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    #22
    Let me put some constructive critics here:
    1. Overall I do not think it is very convenient....first look gives association with internet explorer icon
    2. You can add a 1px border around the letter - choose a color that contrasts slightly (not too aggressive ) so that the letter stands out.

    Cheers.
     
    allancass, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  3. yazidyahaya

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    #23
    its just ok..
     
    yazidyahaya, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  4. bobboken

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    #24
    blue to green hmm?!
    i think you should use more harmonious color
     
    bobboken, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  5. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    #25
    Looks good, but I'm never a fan of a bevel/emboss. :).
     
    Hecky, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  6. Grit.

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    #26
    I like it.... it's simple, and it's got colours that go well together...
     
    Grit., Aug 31, 2008 IP
  7. Hallaboy

    Hallaboy Peon

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    #27
    [​IMG]

    In this Image I added, bit glossy effect and more emboss. The background of "e" is no more beveled but got some inner shadow.

    Now, Its not at all possible that everybody will like my work but by so many comments and suggestions I really learned some new ways of making things work in PS. I am a self learner and I wish to get such support in future too. Still if you think I can do more better in an easier way than please dont stop commenting.
    Thanks a lot everyone ;)
    Especially Dr. Designer, DREAM SIZE, Sallyanne, Bikerbanjara and all who are not mentioned too. :)
     
    Hallaboy, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  8. civicturbolive

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    #28
    Add some gloss to the ''e'' like web 2.0 and this is going to be perfect. A++ Good Job!
     
    civicturbolive, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  9. HortiKulturist

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    #29
    Honestly, you can put whatever color you want on a logo... what matters most at the end of it all is what the logo looks like in black and white, because if the company decides to use it to print, it won't always be in color.

    Having said that, I think it's too plain. I'm sure not everyone will agree with that, but hey. A differing opinion always helps. :)
     
    HortiKulturist, Aug 31, 2008 IP
  10. kéké

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    #30
    a yellow glowing effect behind the left part of the "E" should make it more sunshiny ^^

    The "e" does no more look like a 'no smoking area' but it still the impression of the Internet Explorer ...

    What you've done is really a nice job ^^. Keep working in design, you'll do something good !

    Kéké
     
    kéké, Sep 1, 2008 IP
  11. Anna X

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    #31
    It looks like the nice earth.
    I think it is plain for a logo. It may be better to change the e thing to be a little more appealing.
    Keep it up. :)
     
    Anna X, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  12. 23 Skiddoo

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    #32
    I like the first version, actually. It's very simple and appealing. :]
     
    23 Skiddoo, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  13. technophobicseo

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    #33
    the first version of your work is good but i like the progression of your logo. nice work man.:D
     
    technophobicseo, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  14. Hallaboy

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    #34
    I finally decided to change the complete font of e from something more stylish and meaningful and I choose this font which also looks like a paper pin.
    If this looks more better than that usual E than I will start giving more time to make this look more better than what it is now.

    [​IMG]

    I am so much thankful for this great support from all who replied me and taught me so much. Its really a great way to learn by showing your work.

    Thanks all.
     
    Hallaboy, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  15. enkass132

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    #35
    your first design is best. Color combination was good. but 3. one is different from others.
     
    enkass132, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  16. Vspark

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    #36
    Yep it dose look very good, my opinion is that it would look alot better if you kept the backround black and give the logo a glossy effect.
     
    Vspark, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  17. Hallaboy

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    #37
    Yes I thought to change it because 1st two were looking more like a explorer "E" and also like no-smoking sign. There was no other way to make that same "e" look good either by adding effects or changing colors in it so I tried this one the 3rd logo. Its is also a font, I just changed it position and make it look like a paper pin.
     
    Hallaboy, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  18. websells

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    #38
    you tried well but it need more web 2.0 look some glossy effect on "e".
     
    websells, Sep 2, 2008 IP
  19. jenmerie

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    #39
    I liked your first revision (the second design). However I don't like the background you have behind the actual e. Because it throws off the main graphic I think. But not bad at all.
     
    jenmerie, Sep 2, 2008 IP