clubdice & diceVIP - $107 logo design contest

Another two, again, feedback appreicated.

 

My submission:

 

Hecky: Firstly thanks for all your entries. Note that I loved your first entry as it had a very corporate feel to it - simple colours and flat except it lacked dices like in my previouis replies.

Your next two designs didn't appeal to me simply because they lacked a few elements of the first design which I particularly liked:
- it didn't have a border/edge around it
- the dice itself was almost trying to look hip 3d
- the stripes didn't really appeal to me


Your latest design was an improvement to your first, but still had the funky looking dice in there [I didn't like the funky looking dice - it kind of wrecked the image of being serious]

I can only say that coolwanz improved on your original concept which almost ticked all the boxes [no I didn't have a checklist or I would have listed it!]

Having said the above about how I like the border and edge around the text, please keep in mind it is a contest and I am open to all ideas.
e.g. designX's last entry #31 and Ariestoteles entry #30 are absolutely fantastic even without borders which I liked. This is why I need your ideas as I'm creatively challenged


Crowquill: feels a little too generic and the choice of colour makes it look old. What I mean by that is I can make out the wings too much, almost as if we're associated with flying/animals


So far the winner is still coolwanz followed closely by Ariestoteles [#30] and designX [#31] in no particular order.

Again thankyou for all your submissions, theres still about another 13 hours to go from this post. Good luck!

 

Thanks beedee for the feedback. Will post another concept.

 

Awh, ok. I will try and make another.

 

They all suck but I'll enter then anyway. .

 

Another concept:

 

That's actually a fantastic design crowquill. Seems very well thought out.

Could you add some colors for reference?

 

Thanks for the feedback, Would you like to suggest any specific colors?

 

next layout...

 

Ariestoteles: looks very very good. each one of your designs grow on me a little more however with this design it seems to look better as simply white.

Perhaps try reducing the white outline around the text/image for the colored designs

 

HI BD.. Thanks for feedback...
here's next layout...

 

One more logo design with little twist...



Thanks.

 

Thanks for the feedback, beedee.
Just let me know if you need me to try some tweaks. I'll be here
kind regards

 

A different direction...

 

Another attempt. I hope this one is more serious

 

I decided i will enter this contest so please wait for a little bit. I'm not sure when the deadline is anyway heh.

 

Here's my submission :



Not really a finished version; just wanted to ask for feedback at this point.

Davey.

 

Competition ending very soon, just confirming with the rest of the people in club

 

Here is my attempt.