Hi guys, So glad I can ask advice. I have a website www.personalityanalytics.com I want to post it in clickbank to I can promote it better. Could someone have a look at it and tell me if the website is up to standards. The main thing I'm concerned about is the video. It is my first video ever! online and I don’t feel comfortable with it. Does it grab you? I know it’s not the best but I need some feedback. Would it interest you is what I’m asking you? The personality guy
Hi, I can't see your video because it is hosted on youtube and me being in china youtube is blocked. It would make sense to host your video on your website and have a flash player to start playing it as soon as the page displays. As for the page itself, well it is a pretty standard sales page. I have seen pages that go way beyond in terms of efforts in trying to sale their product. With more graphics, underlines, colors, etc.. So while it is not a total failure at all, your page could be greatly improved, just have a look at 10 or more sales pages of the most successful products in clickbank and write down what you think looks good or clever, do that for each product sales page, then find trends, like something good that you've found on several pages, etc. So you'll get good ideas to implement on your own page. I'd say at the moment your sales page is a work in progress, I know it can sound discouraging since you've already worked hard on it, especially the text, but you could also take it as a motivation to put the extra work to make it outstanding, you can do it, so take a little rest and start working on it again like if you just started, but now you already have the text, so that's a cooler job to work on the graphic part.
Thank James for that. I will do that. Wow! you cant access youtube hey. isnt there a way around that. that sort of thing would drive me crazy. lol I'm really greatful for the review man, thanks...means a lot
Yes there is a way around it it is called TOR PROJECT, with non-public bridges because china is actively banning each nodes of the TOR network, so there's need for non public bridges that keeps on changing regularly.. It's slower, and for youtube it is not so useful.. There's also the option of having VPN in another country whose IP is not blocked.. Youtube is not too bad, because I'm staying here only 4 weeks, but also all *.blogspot.com is blocked, as well as facebook, twitter and many others not related to whatever the chinese governement wants to hide from its citizen (like tien an men, or who knows what) I couldn't live for long in china because of this internet blocking which is arbitrary and total non sense anyway, at least they should give open access to foreigners since what they want is ocntrol the net for their own people, me I don't even speak chinese and I don't care what their governement does, except about the internet, this is bad