check out my seo report website and tell me what you think can i improve it?

please visit my site and give me your opinion thanks.

http://www.seo--report.com

 

Clean site structure. I had a talk with an SEO friend a couple of weeks ago and he mentioned about validating HTML/CSS scripts on W3.org, so I did enter your URL on their w3 validator and it returned 57 errors on your code. I think it is important that the site is error free?

 

thanks a lot for looking i am aware of the errors but not sure how to correct them, i used weebly to create my site, ive emailed them and they said some of the html code is hidden so i can't correct it. any ideas?

 

I think it looks nice, however not particularly appropriate for the target audience. I'd use lighter colours.

 

thanks for looking why is it not particularly appropriate for the target audience? do you think it would look better with a white background?

 

Just the general feel, maybe a bit dark. Maybe don't listen to me

 

You need some kind of header to associate your site. I don't know what to suggest really. I don't want to sound harsh... but i would not buy from your site or even stay on it for more then 5 seconds. When it come's to selling a SEO product. If the site doesn't look spot on then "Does he really know what he is talking about" comes to mind. Either way good luck and don't take my word's the wrong way, just think twice about what your goal is.

 

I'm not familiar with weebly. Sorry I can't help you how to fix it. Anyone knows how here?

 

thank you all for looking at my site, i appretiate your honesty and don't take it the wrong way at all.
since most of you didnt like the dark colours i decided to change it, i would really appreciate it if you would mind taking another look and let me know if it is better,
thanks.

http://www.seo--report.com/

 

Header looks no very good.
I think you can find someone on this forum or somewhere else who will design a better one.
Also add info to a page "about us".

 

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I wanted to type: Header looks not very good))
Rest of site looks good!

 

Hi,

It's a good site. Look is so simple and specially revolving globe is looking very nice.
Have a Good Day!

 

Maybe you need to rephrase the introduction. Like you say: "This report compares your site to the top 10 websites"...
The top 10 of what? There are so many niches and each one of them have their own top 10. Maybe a site is in a niche so unique that is ranks #1 already.
Then you state "Suppose you want a top 10 ranking for the search term " I never heard of anybody who does NOT want that, so "supposing" is like kicking in an open door.

be a bit more ferm with your words, like:
No doubt you want a top ten postion in all searchengines. We help you. We scan your site and our 40 page report tells you iin detail how you can achieve that.
(something along these lines) I am not a native speaker (actually I am from Holland) but the wording you use now is showing too much modesty.

 

hi boudewijn
thanks alot for your excelent advice, you've raised some good points i have changed it following your advice
thank you.

 

I like the total feel of the site1

 

Your head line might need some adjustment as well.
Now it says:
Do you own a website? Get your 40+ page detailed seo report and optimize your website to increase page ranking in search engines and get more traffic.
Do you really think people would read this page if they do NOT have a website?

What I would do is something like:
Push Your Website Ranking To A Top Ten Position Today And Get More Targetted Visitors.
Do you want a high Google Ranking?
Do You Want More Sales And Increase Your Monthly Income?
In Our 40+ Page Report We Reveil The Secrets To Get A High Google Pagerank For Your Site.

Get Your report NOW And Click Here!

First you draw the attention (the top ten position)
Then you ask two obvious questions, this brings them in a "YES" state.
(I mean, who does not want more money these days? what site owner does NOT want a high ranking of his/her site?)
Then you tell them where they can find the secret to achieve this (your report).
And then you do a call for action.

The last line (Get your report) should bring them to a page where they fill in all you need to know and with a PayPal button on it.
You get paid immediately and they get the report asap.
Redirect them to a Thank You page after the transaction is done.
maybe bringing one of your other services to the attention there. (Upsell)

FYI, doing a reseach on exact phrases I found this:
Website ranking has 12K+ global monthly searches.
Google Ranking has 22K+ global monthly searches
Google Pagerank has 27K+ global monthly searches.
Looking for the broad search on "more sales" I find 18K global monthly searches.
Looking for the broad search on "monthly income" I find well over 90K global monthly searches.
nearly 200K monthly searches all together, Go figure.

Be aware though that, in order to rank high in Google for your own site, you do need "quite a few" backlinks yourself. (to use an understatement).
But that should be no problem, I can help you with that.

 

ive taken note and made some more adjustments, thanks for pointing out some good keywords too i was consentrating on only a few.
i did have a page to fill out before checkout but discovered a few people filled out the form and didnt pay, so after checkout it redirectes to a form page then thank you page.
how can you help me with backlinks?

thanks again for your time.

 

Just replace the introduction u well be ok

 

How about 10K unique backlinks, based on your keywords, for $15 I can do this once or per month (costs then $10 per month) for as long as you see fit.
These are not in a linkwheel. Or I can create seven articles, using your separate keywords, and place those in a linkwheel on blogsites with a PR 5 to 10.
Costs are then $70 per 7 articles.

 

i may be interested in the articles i will pm you for more details