Check out my new health site

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    stickycarrots, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  2. davexd

    davexd Guest

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    #2
    Nice and clean.

    In the spirit of constructive criticism:

    • Make the post text a little darker
    • Fix the alignment of the search box
    • Change the header to something diet related

    You can add some great images from sxc.hu :)
     
    davexd, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  3. bobbylove321

    bobbylove321 Active Member

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    I like the simplicity of it however it needs more color and content.
     
    bobbylove321, Aug 21, 2008 IP
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    Scarlett Banned

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    Its neat and nice but it's too simple. Maybe you can add images like a person eating greens.
     
    Scarlett, Aug 21, 2008 IP
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    #5
    That theme is tight, but says nothing visually that it has anything to do with health, dieting, etc.

    That floral design doesn't really fit, the colors don't really fit... Perhaps add images to the posts, it may help, but I'd look for a new theme and a logo that screams your topic.

    Content that is there looks pretty good, couple typos (spel chek :cool:), keep adding. I would incorporate some bolds and italics where appropriate to break up the text, such as bolding the "Drop that fat:", etc. in your 2nd article.

    Also there are no hyperlinks anywhere in your posts yet that point to more info, other pages, or products to purchase.
     
    dominion4040, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  6. stickycarrots

    stickycarrots Peon

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    does any one have a theme they would suggest
     
    stickycarrots, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    Teaspoons and diets would be good...darker font and more color
     
    patgrb, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    lycos Well-Known Member

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    #8
    Although some would say the theme looks ok, but for me, I feel it doesn't match your health niche. Usually I often come across health sites in white color but final choices is still up to you. Another thing is that you should consider doing is adding images to your posts because it looks quite dull without them.
     
    lycos, Aug 22, 2008 IP
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    Not bad...but u need to add some images to look better and attractive...
     
    americanalian, Aug 24, 2008 IP
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    Poor design, you have too improve it.
     
    Lucas12, Aug 24, 2008 IP