Check out my Landing Page

I want to boost my budget and get some more visitors.... I have kind of been testing things and I wanted some DP members to take a look before I step it up



SO HIT ME HARD----- BE HONEST, BE MEAN, BUT BE CONSTRUCTIVE

thanks


www.forexmachine.info

 

The cd graphic looks a little rough around the edges but other than that I think it looks pretty good. Also, I think you should have used a ".com" TLD instead of a .info because it seems more professional.

 

Hang on a second! Did you steal the images and graphics off your affiliate's website? If the owner found out about that you could be in some trouble so I would advise you to come up with your own custom website.

 

My impression:

Ugly background graphics, loads too slow. Do a test with this vs. one without background images. Slower load times will decrease your Quality Score.

 

Slower load times,add more proof if have

 

Don't like the background image. Too much black color. The product box is lost in the background. It took me a while to notice something was there. I agree with the comment about the product cd.

 

thanks guys.... i try taking out a few graphics on maybe putting in a white backround. As far as the graphics go, the owner is cool with it, in fact, he encouraged it.

anything else?

 

I like it personally.

 

Landing page reviews are generally worthless. The reason is the only thing that matters is does the page convert. What a bunch of strangers on an adwords forum think about it doesn't really matter much. If you want real data, do a split test of page a versus page b, check your results and tweak.

 

thanks PPC.... BTW I am signing up with you next month!

 

IMHO, the background colors are not very professional. I have also experienced slower loading of the page. You have used very bright colors for text too. The header looks a bit larger and occupies a lot of space on the front page.

Try fixing these things and it might be looking fine. Good luck!

 

I like it, but maybe you can do some experimenting with backgrounds. I feel like this one takes away from the page too much.

 

WHat the hell are you smoking? All publishers let you use there grafics if you are promoting there product!

 

Yes, they let you use "a few" graphics but not their whole freakin website! And for you to ask for reviews on a landing page that you didn't really create yourself is absurd.

 

I agree fully with teh slow loading part

 

hey man, go to the affiliate page and see for yourself... HE has great graphics ( i think) so why not use them if he's letting me? And I was looking for a review mainly on the content so if you dont have anything good to say then dont say anything at all!

Thanks to everyone else.

 

Sure he has great graphics. That he probably paid somebody to create for HIMSELF. Not for one of his affiliates to STEAL.

 

haha... im sure he would turn down affiliates using his graphics to sell his products, even when it makes him more money.

 

Well you can see it whatever way you want to. When you make some sales and don't credit for it don't say I didn't warn you. Maybe you should email the webmaster and show them your landing page to get approval. Simply speculating that they'll go along with it isn't the best way to go.

 

Nice graphic...but its very long time to loading..just make it fast Bro...but all of part your landing page is preety good...can u teach me how to created this?