Check out my Banner Design Please!!

Hi People i would like to show my banner designs, i am a starter but i think i am doing very well! can you review my banner please? and tell me how it is;

here is my first banner :


and my 2nd banner :



i have more but i dont want to put too many, please tell me how these 2 banners are.

 

They look good. Nice work.

 

THanks ! people tell me if anything needs improving.

 

Yo! The banner looks good really! One thing im not sure about is the colors, like for the 1st one. use 2 -3 color combination only. You have white, black, blue, red, orange there.

Nice work overall. keep it up

 

Nice banner but text is hard to read because of the effects

 

semodders: Your doing well , only thing I would say is try not to use so many effects all at the same time and use an easier to read font as well as the colours don't use so many, apart from that keep up the good work

 

To much effect and you must remember that readability is very important to convey the message and too much effect are really annoying for visitor

 

For the first banner, I think the animation is a bit fast... It's kind of hard to read the text when it disappears every so split second.

 

You are doing more then very well indeed

 

I think the text is hard to read.. Maybe it's because of the effects..

 

Way too annoying. Try to not make so many Flashy "OMFG CLIK HERE LOL!" slogans all over it. That really puts me off when someone does that. But good job.

 

I think you have to work on readability of second banner, but you are doing good.
Best luck!

 

iv made another banner for my new site yesterday night ..



iv made an site yesterday night ..this banner if for this site www.imageupload.ws

 

You have a tendency to sometimes go a little overboard with the animation. Perhaps you should try and tone it down a little. Less is more, KISS ..etc.

 

awesome work, i really like the 1st one alot A+++

 

They look good. But I find them a bit too colorfull.

 

great job! looks amazing

 

You're doing great! Just a little too fast on the effects

 

The last banner is way much better than the first two you've posted specially in color blending.

 

Too shiny for me.. keep people away I think