Check My New Article Published In Ezinearticles

Hello,
I am Eli and I’d like to write on different topics. One of my favourites is history.
I placed this thread because I would like to know the opinion of Digital Point members about my newest published article in ezinearticles.

I just need your guidance, remarks, and fare judgment in order to become one of the best article writers.

http://ezinearticles.com/?Gladiators---Ave,-Caesar,-Morituri-Te-Salutant!&id=1935634

Wish you all the best and I hope that you will share your thoughts with me.

 

I see you only put one word keyword, try to target 2 or 3 keyword phrase, so your article could get good position in Google or other search engine. Btw, welcome to the forum mate

 

Really a nice article. Well-written

 

Excellent article and at same time interesting to read.Concentrate on seo part inorder to make your articles to reach everyone.Thanks.

 

Gladiators!! You remind me of Russel Crowl. A nice movie indeed! Oh..your article is well written too.

 

Thank you all for your opinions and suggestions. Hopefully I will receive some more.

 

Hi Eli. Interesting article. I agree with guniwan, you do need to target and include your main keyword two or three times in an article of that length in order to have the article rank well in Google's search engine. I did find a few grammatical errors, particularly in the use of verb tenses, but the more you write and proof read out loud what you have written, I am certain those errors will become less. Best of luck in your writing endeavors.

 

Great article and I learned a lot about the gladiators from your article.