Cheap Electronics site - Please review

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Nickower, Jan 31, 2007.

  1. #1
    Please tell me what you think, i only made it tonight and its still in BETA. I know the digital cameras section is a bit skew wiff but im working on it,
    All comments and suggestions are much appreciated.. No such thing as bad feedback!:D
    the site is
    http://www.mybuypal.com
     
    Nickower, Jan 31, 2007 IP
  2. SirPsychoSexy

    SirPsychoSexy Well-Known Member

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    Not a bad design overall. I'm not sure the big yellow heading serves much purpose though. Maybe you could add a paragraph surrounded with a dotted border onto it, with a brief summary of the services your site provides, just to fill the void.

    Remove your email address so its not directly written in the code. You'll just open up your mailbox to spam, go on google and find a script to secure your mail address better or use a seperate form for users to contact you with.

    You could also consider breaking up the left menu so the categories are seperate from the home, about us and contact us links too.

    » home
    » about us
    » contact us

    » Xbox 360
    » Televisions
    » Computers
    » Playstation
    » Mobile Phones
    » DVDS
    » MP3 Players
    » Computer Games
    » Digital Cameras
     
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  3. Nickower

    Nickower Banned

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    #3
    Maybe i could put up pictures of products my site "sells"?
     
    Nickower, Jan 31, 2007 IP
  4. SirPsychoSexy

    SirPsychoSexy Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, or even both.
     
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  5. stickycarrots

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    looks good do you make any money on it???
     
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    You might want to make the header look more professional. The xbox360 controller and the TV still either have white parts from the original image around it, or you erased some parts of the image.
     
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  7. Nickower

    Nickower Banned

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    Yeh im not very good with photoshop..
     
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    design is good.but that gray color text on gray background hard to read.
    replace that gray background with another color.
    rest of the things looks fine.
     
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    not bad id use a logo tho not a fan of text based logos
     
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    Really? I quite like the logo...
     
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    Fantastic web design. Try to make the header image more understandable. I think the game controller and the tv is not syncronised.
     
    webcrawler, Feb 2, 2007 IP