card design

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  1. #1
    hi
    i want improved my design.please tell me suggestion.

    thank .......
     

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  2. Digital_Designer

    Digital_Designer Banned

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    #2
    Good effort.Here are the things you can improve :
    1.Make texts clear so that it can be read easily.
    2.Add some stars in background if it is a night scene.

    Hope this helps.

    Thanks!
     
    Digital_Designer, Nov 19, 2008 IP
  3. goldenpearl

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    #3
    hi
    thank for suggestion.
     

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    Project Mobius Peon

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    #4
    i don't think the top left text looks good like this....i think you should stick to the white color and make it a bit bigger
     
    Project Mobius, Nov 20, 2008 IP
  5. amirsalmani

    amirsalmani Active Member

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    #5
    Make rose bigger and clear, Make you text clear and smooth. The top text Eid Mubarak should be more big and clear... Move moon to right and the girl is at right place..

    thanks

    one more thing you can do the bottom text you could put this text in two lines..

    the top text Eid Mubarak should be in Scriptina font... Just try it and let me know
     
    amirsalmani, Nov 20, 2008 IP
  6. ElementalDesigns

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    #6
    MY suggestions are to:

    -Organise the content a bit more
    -Watch your colours used
    -Make the images clearer
    -Choose a 'focal point'
     
    ElementalDesigns, Nov 21, 2008 IP
  7. goldenpearl

    goldenpearl Active Member

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    #7
    hi
    thanks for suggestion.
    i have change card.
     

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    goldenpearl, Nov 26, 2008 IP
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    Great. Now the content and the information are getting nicer and in a proper arrangement. Nice job!
     
    fizi1784, Nov 27, 2008 IP
  9. goldenpearl

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    hi
    thank sir.

     
    goldenpearl, Nov 28, 2008 IP
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    #10
    Get A New Design I Suggest :p
     
    srafayj, Nov 29, 2008 IP
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    #11
    Make sure you always limit your fonts with that you limit the font color as well not unless you have a reason to color it. Everything has a reason in design... My teacher would always ask me why this is green etc etc and why this image is at the top part when it can be in the middle. There is always a reason!
     
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  12. amirsalmani

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    I don't think this guy is making the changes at all.... This is the same design I saw that first.
     
    amirsalmani, Nov 29, 2008 IP
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    #13
    my opinion:

    change bottom font to something less fussy...
    make stars at top right more random

    then will be fine.
     
    mob4u1, Nov 30, 2008 IP
  14. goldenpearl

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    #14
    hi
    thank all of you.
     
    goldenpearl, Dec 2, 2008 IP
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    #15
    While designing anything , the design should deliver the message and the text should be clear and readable.
    Dont make over design, make it simple and nice
     
    rkharikrishnan, Dec 3, 2008 IP
  16. goldenpearl

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    #16
    hi
    thanks for suggestion.
     

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  17. joshhatcher

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    #17
    I don't particularly like the look of the moon... what is the white glare around it ? it looks like it's copy pasted from a photo you downloaded and blew up...

    try using a crisper cresecent...


    and the english doesn't make much sense.. is it missing a word or two?
     
    joshhatcher, Dec 7, 2008 IP
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    #18
    You had some stars and took them out...maybe you could try to add some small, random stars of different brightness. Also, as mentioned above, I think you're missing some text in your bottom message.
     
    Proxima, Dec 7, 2008 IP
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    goldenpearl Active Member

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    #19
    hi
    please tell me my Design prices.
    thank in advance.
     
    goldenpearl, Dec 14, 2008 IP